I suck at writing now

[Omega Bill]

The body count racks up, Im a lyrical wolverine n neva needed back up
But these niggas got they slack up, n they better be into gettin jacked up
Neva say that Im bullet proof, but can send ur fuckin skull through the roof
Missin a tooth n bashin while I cash in and I can blame it on my roots
I can leave a nigga suit-less, violent blanks of rage knowin that Im ruthless
Crushin ur mouth n teaching you niggas the true meaning of a fuckin boot-lip
Ive said before that my mind is split and I guarantee u dont wanna meet us
Cuz Im fucked enough to kill ya baby momma and send 2 rounds to the fetus
I dont rap bout gettin my drink on, Im drunk on the blood of your deadly kin
N fuckin with me ull never win cuz I stay a Grizzly n yall niggas a Teddy Rumpskin

[Dynamiq]

lol its all good man..i thought this was pretty creative i meen at least you tried right?

other than that it was a decent piece keep at it and respect.

[-MenaCe-]

Decent Drop, Wanna See Some More.


8/10

[Quix]

dont rap bout gettin my drink on, Im drunk on the blood of your deadly kin
N fuckin with me ull never win cuz I stay a Grizzly n yall niggas a Teddy Rumpskin


?? ^^ not good!!

this more like a 5/10 Average at best!!

i've seen better from yah Billly!

[Haz]

I agree With Quix ...
You Should Throw This Shit Out N Snap Back Into It

[-MenaCe-]

Keep Em Comin.

[JHaze]

from what everyone else is sayin it seems u can do much better, this wasnt bad n i can see that u got potential for some nice shit, keep droppin bro

[Omega Bill]

from what everyone else is sayin it seems u can do much better, this wasnt bad n i can see that u got potential for some nice shit, keep droppin bro

Shoulda seen what I could drop before I stopped writing, haha.

[Lawgix]

yeeaahhhhh compared to previous shit u've wrote this was really whack n just not thought out too well... i mean Ruthless Bootlip? hows that a multi? doesnt really even rhyme man... hope to see some more shit n better shit next time around...

i agree with quix 5/10