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finally startin to fall back into audio again,before i wasnt comfortable recording anything for a while. anyways,heres a little somethin i did. let me kno!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=81E3v-gDkcU
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Post by The Gonz »

This was alright. A little too basic for my liking though. Could use some sprucing up. I think the delivery is a little on the boring side, but can't really expect you to portray a lot of hunger in a track like this. Quality seems decent though.
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^^Rucks like FUK THAT BITCH!!, lol


But track was alittle 2 slow i think im more into more hyped up shit u kno, but not bad.
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aw im lovinn dis.. ya intros cute as hell haha. i think it had a good flow n i love tha concept.
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rukus i agree 100%.and menace,ya it was a bit slow but im tryna shake the rust off..still got alot to work on i kno but im tryin! haha. and thanks for the feed solqet glad ya liked the intro. apperciate all the feed from yall,uppin!
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Re: You & Me Remix

Post by Kurse »

Good to see you wake from the dead lol

...nah, I can see what your sayin about shakin the rust off. It's been more than a minute since your last joint, so you just need to keep bangin them out so you can get back into the groove of thangs!

Concept is mediocre, but you've learned to ride beats better. Even with a slow flow...it's all good! That's just some niggaz m.o.
Mixing is a bit better than your older material as well. Keep at it bruh...practice always makes perfect.
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Post by Viral »

good to see u back mayne...this shit was pretty solid compared to the last track i remember hearin from u...lol...ur flow has gotten better...u still seem to have that monotone like voice with it...and ur style seems to be the same...which isnt bad just means u can build more and more on it if u arent tired of it yet...haha....infact i think one of the da last things ive heard from u was dat toy solider collab we did...haha..shits old i sounded like booty on that i believe...lol...but keep doin u man
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