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The Verbal Swordsman ft. Plex - Haz

Post by complexity »

I know all my lines weren't directed at Illest Minds. They were not suppose to be. Its long, its our first collab. Part 2 coming soon to a scripture near you?


Why wouldn't we attack this crew?
we own the avenue to success,they are just passing through
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they've been smashing few collab's lacking true impact we'll leave them black and blue
some football movie stars there actings threw..Like owls fucking they bashing..WHO?..stupid cats!
guess who is back? plex, and I don't need this track, shoot Quix in the brain, same place his ego sat
we got the human genome mapped, and he still can't find where my evils at
he's blind, Lawgix ain't been the same since he went black
Mutual, don't attempt to rap, look how much weight your benchin
ten flat?
then look how hard your acting..motherfucker 9/11 just happened, you were seven when I started rappin
my lyrics are artifacts when... you're younger than Taliban Fighters
makes me want ban writers
this is art with passion, you could say that my hearts attackin

Sooo Why Take part With Retarded Yappin!
You Can get Bombarded Cracking Like D.E.A after deala's This rappa
Peel's a Aloot of Other rappas 'caps' it's like a magnit Feel ta show
you Faggit's Real Tatic's in snatching titles
Your Trash Deciples, Only Oscar Lawgix'll Get is From The Sesame Street Cycle..
we aim to be psycho with these rifles, menace the rap that your doin
is funny, your ass is amusin, I'm fast to concludin, you're hoods in the ghetto, ur lackin improvement
every fact I am spewing you have actually proven
look whats happened to you in a matter months, you're back to just losin
rapid confusion like acid llusions, i'm like soma pills, i'm relaxin your movement
fuck ur crew, ur whole faction is stupid, back in 01, I was a Jay Z engineer, I mastered the blueprint
after the music, its just beef...Lawgix you're nothing but a dead beat
i'll fill you all in boxes like a spreadsheet

all empty stomached cause they were fed heat! illest minds is scoped Beef That Mean's RED MEAT!..
Yes there WELL DONE yall won't 'Have a Run' get ya leg's tweeked,
i'm ahead Geek's Like urcle To steffon, We gunna Treat this Like a dance
Floor till Theres nothing To STEP ON!..this verse is like a day after pill it'll kill later
those shells won't be strays in the stray jackets of them ill haters,like a unfilled gator
i make um pray, for every hour cause it would take them day's to break this play we putt together
to shake the gay's like powdered weed,i hate the Way them Coward's breathe..it's Like they need
a extra Breath, the weakest link.. "no page visit's..Need extra step's! they Dont have a Stool..
the type of Kids who Claimed Haz a foool When he was Bad in School jokes thinking laughings cool
they don't know How to carry themselves like buying Wagon Muel's these Fag's is fool's ..
It's time to Put these Goldfish ina Massive Pool..lawgix's logic shulda 'Saw ya downfall' like his
Ass's a Tool..
you don't want to take my wrath in a dual, the matches are cruel
you all are just half of my fuel, like Lupe
Fiasco, you wish you bastards were cool, i'm straight from the past
ur crew has no faith in the facts, you're a catholic school
I'll write this transparent so the sentence is clear, menace is queer
Mutual is demented and weird, the only thing that starts my engine is fear
and i'm sensing a tear, I got my senses in gear
I'm splended, tremendous, when the pen appears
I write like hemisphere, intend to smear
these defenseless pears, I have my field down to a science like engineers
time to extend my career, no contender is near
at the end of the year, i send a remember I'm here
September is here, about to pass, and its severe, because December is near
Fuck Lawgix....my rhymes are amping him like the energy drink..moe than that..."I'm A Champion 2"
coming soon, this ain't hockey, get sent to the brink...
your thoughts are empty...I'm putting the pen to the ink
Hazard and me are perfectly in-lign,that is why our rhymes are mentally synced
I have a controversial technique, circlin-weeks like vacations, commercial and street
sensation, search for relief like police, no station, the words that i speak
ain't getting rotation, being verbally deep is low-payin, but its certainly sweet
the ovations cause the earth to be tweaked, my location is the surface beneath
behold satan, when I emerge as a beast, procreation was a perfect deceit
millions of souls I'm takin, my work is complete, I control the nation, they worship my feet
its motivation, when my verses are leaked, for this souless haven, the churches defeat
nuns are obeying, I'm converting the priests, if I go praying, its concerning this beef
there's no saying, I lost my vertical leap, plus I'm raising the bar, performing hercules feats
opposing police, serving the peace, ever since my birth I been bleak
searchin for beats, researchin the street, it's absurd to compete, when I'm a champion 2 has a certain release
to the first slash third degree, give my verses free, purposely to hurt emcees
you're desert to me, appitizers, aim messengers, older versions of me
rapping liars, I'm the same artist old paintin, makes u gay chumps to start to wonder
how your going to keep it all in the family, you ain't archie bunker
you ain't close, cant steal my thunder, I'm so dope, I blaze satan, you're suppose to hate him
because every quote your sayin, will get your discs snapped quicker than a broken playstation
the reason I diss you is because I'm a contrarian
some of you kids have very thin skin and barely win, its embarrassin
I'm in a bad mood...don't test PLEX..or HAZARD, this is only the first part
watch...the evolution of rhymes...now, let Haz's verse start..

i burp sparks And Straight up Earth farts
a nasty ass nigga not playing his church part,
you Can get Beat Without a jesus clip hit
you with the Silencer on Some speechliss shit
you Leeches fit in a Jar of acid
your movements like florida people far from masscive..
you pass fib's like no stop signs you Trash kid's
Can't kick Hot Rhyme's your Only Hotline
Probably says "creditcard number so you can pay for your cock time!"..
Drop Mine? Yeah i Am But Yall Don't Got
enough sweat to Drop in Order Ta play My hand..Plex is Seen as iran..
That's why i Rack ya Head's Up n Then Sigh fam..
cause there's more n it's war..
Menace i'ma shoot till ya ass is gone like a Anerexic Whore's..
or pour liquids From a mechanics perfected droar
see if you can run With it .. But you'll end up in panic n reckless more,
protect your door..startt covering with plastic we'll hover in with plastic
leave you brothers in e lastic..
Leave ya 'Jammed up' straight Smothered in ya Casket's..
Look! these cats is walking s-t-d's a bunch of whores,
won't get off My Dick like can u get anymore kids FROM SHAHZOOR?
Give it Up your Soar! Lawgix..Mac Or Ghost Aint here
so you Aint Acting TOUGH NO MORE?..
o i Read ya Game like a riddle page ..
your Fat as fuck But middleweight
What's Different About us? a Little Age?.
.Or your Warming up To Life While i'm On a Sizzle Stage ..
Literally Check Out ya Social Life it's In a Thread That's Barely Holdin Right..
Bout snap Cus doods Like that Deserve to Remain in A Ditch
Eminem wanna be's who think they'll Gain fame With His Script..
HEY RECKIN ALL! your a Fucking Bum,
a Homo Who Likes to Dig in Holes But wait Till you get Stuck In One ..
Mutual make sure your blood vessels slit..
cause me n plex took the mine apart like disarming specialists
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hmmm, 90% Filla, No lie Dog, n Plex came correct, No hate! but a lot a filla in yah barz Dog!


Hazz ... Just admit defeat! your "part 2 diss" ain't gonna be any better, unless Plex spitz even hotta on that!, Smh, Fall Back Kiddo!
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Quix wrote:hmmm, 90% Filla, No lie Dog, n Plex came correct, No hate! but a lot a filla in yah barz Dog!


Hazz ... Just admit defeat! your "part 2 diss" ain't gonna be any better, unless Plex spitz even hotta on that!, Smh, Fall Back Kiddo!
Well. I wouldn't want to do all the dissing before I even got a response, now would I.

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LOL @ Haz needin plex's help!!

Overall it was "OK" haz is pussy,wack, etc etc plex you allready kno no need for feed..


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It was my suggestion.
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i thought it was a pretty good collab yall went back n fourth pretty good cant really comment on it as far as the dissing goes bcuz idk much about the beef or w.e but yea anyway cool shit peace keep droppin
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complexity wrote:It was my suggestion.
queer... i don't even know why u felt the need to attack me but its all good...
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Lawgix wrote:
complexity wrote:It was my suggestion.
queer... i don't even know why u felt the need to attack me but its all good...
Because your in the crew Illest Minds. If you don't want to be a target, don't be in an active rap crew. This is common sense, don't take it personally.
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we ain't been that active really... i'm honestly more focused on what i'm doin... and i keep my mouth shut n come on here n see i'm gettin dissed... i don't take shit personally but damn lay off lol... we all know u write hella better than me... (i need a refresher course i think)... i dunno maybe i'm just bein stubborn n arrogant... idk...
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Lawgix wrote:we ain't been that active really... i'm honestly more focused on what i'm doin... and i keep my mouth shut n come on here n see i'm gettin dissed... i don't take shit personally but damn lay off lol... we all know u write hella better than me... (i need a refresher course i think)... i dunno maybe i'm just bein stubborn n arrogant... idk...
Yes. You're being stubborn. You can't say that you're not an active crew when all of these Illest Minds threads are popping up. I also only took a shot or two at you.

If I would have came out with a solo diss to you. Obviously we have a problem, I just took a few shots at everybody in the crew, I expect to get a few back, nothing more than that.
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complexity wrote: I just took a few shots at everybody in the crew, I expect to get a few back, nothing more than that.

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-MenaCe- wrote:
complexity wrote: I just took a few shots at everybody in the crew, I expect to get a few back, nothing more than that.

Yes you should...
As you should, now PLEASE, stop free posting in these threads.
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i don't find commenting on threads, freeposting....your just mad cuz its not feed thats bumping you or people saying you was dope! smh!


is that a freepost ?? ^^ not quite sure how your definin those these days!
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Uh. I was complaining about it days before I dropped this piece. Believe it or not, I don't care about being called dope or anything close to that, if that was the case, I wouldn't leave some of the realest feedback on this site. I expect to get hell back, and I have got my share over the years. Before you speak, can you at least think, check your facts or something.

As for bumping my pieces, I honestly, could give a shit less, I want feedback from people who want to leave it. I don't want to force anything, you will never see me, attempting to get everyone on the board to leave feed on one of my pieces. Unfortunately your whole entire argument is pretty irrelevant. Now STOP FREEPOSTING.
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Post by MOEstradamus »

i never seen a shot at me well i seen one thing but it wasnt even a punch or anything at all

anyway of the feed

complexity had some good flow and punches but you did have some other non diss lines but you planned on that id give ur part 9/10

Hazard you shit flowed good too had some good lines but it seems like ur tryna hold back on ur lines becuz ur waitin on a battle id give urs a 8/10

good collab guys even if it was a diss against us ill still feed it
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