MenaCe vs Precise (Precise wins by KO)

[-MenaCe-]

6 Barz.
House Rules.
Verse Due:24hrs After Check.

[precise]

i hadnt noticed this here

check

[-MenaCe-]

Check...

[precise]

im earnest on the surface... cool 007 style, but my aim with the burners perfect//
be concerned kid, i dont got a license to kill... but i do got a learners permit//

dont wait for it to serve its purpose.. i slay men, shit change yer name again//
soon as i take a pen... ill leave u followin prayer like the phrase "amen"//

i destroy contenders droppin poison embers, off benders of sippin 'roids from blenders//
this kids coy n slender..dudes less of a menace than dennis, watch this boy surrender//

a villain primed on killin time, i keystyle n drive em INSANE cause im "ill"..defined//
precise'll rhyme em into the asylum.. with the rest of the worlds "illest minds"//

i'll send menace to the dentist, this shits more dangerous than tennis with lead is//
this battle? not expectin his attendance, cause my styles "built on a flow" like venice..//

musta drank a 40 to battle me willingly.. hes playin his damn-cards-wrong//
this kid menace only got BALLS "half in the bag" like lance-armstrong// (get it?)

[-MenaCe-]

Listen!!



I dug this fuck up to strickly prove a point that his voice isn't ever Heard or Comprehended..
Did u ever in ya life Stop N question? your not impressive I'll "stop ya message" Like Co-op Defenses!!..
Wit intensions so foul and obscrude leavin this soft spoken boss broken Nows He's In Two..
Far from the caution kind this guy couldn't "walk the line" like a bad faggot Pre's Balance is Screwed!!..
Don't get it twisted or confused when i'm sittin pitchin disses at this fool i always Hit the Target..
My fingers tips seem to be wat you get ripped apart wit Hows he "precise" when he'll miss regardless!
His verse Is ah pure example of what not to do while in Battle formation anxious Chasin Tha Win..
Instead he's depressed and suggested he's a loser cause the only thing his Parents are Erasin Is Him!!..
With tha old age N all and this washed up waste just falls deeper continuing to Drown in Sorrow N Tears..
Fuk original his flows been Borrowed for years kill this punk got em lookin for luck cause Tomorrow is Near!!..
Ya punches are barely jabs so dont brag when everybody just seen you get ya soul and Heart Diminished..
Bad time to take a nap cause infact it caused you the match! ya got ripped PRECISELY from Start To Finish!!..

[TreTru]

Precise

im earnest on the surface... cool 007 style, but my aim with the burners perfect//
be concerned kid, i dont got a license to kill... but i do got a learners permit//
^^
nice flow, structure, multi's concept but no punch..2.5/5

dont wait for it to serve its purpose.. i slay men, shit change yer name again//
soon as i take a pen... ill leave u followin prayer like the phrase "amen"//
^^i liked this bar better flo and srtruc's alway's on ..3.5/5

i destroy contenders droppin poison embers, off benders of sippin 'roids from blenders//
this kids coy n slender..dudes less of a menace than dennis, watch this boy surrender//
^^
The setup bar was a sik rhyme IMO(poison embers) multi madness..punch was aight..3.0/5

a villain primed on killin time, i keystyle n drive em INSANE cause im "ill"..defined//
precise'll rhyme em into the asylum.. with the rest of the worlds "illest minds"//
^^
nice personal bar with a punch hella ill imo..4.5/5

i'll send menace to the dentist, this shits more dangerous than tennis with lead is//
this battle? not expectin his attendance, cause my styles "built on a flow" like venice..//
^^^
good struc. and all but the sim is a lil soft and it's more of a self hype bar..2.5/5

musta drank a 40 to battle me willingly.. hes playin his damn-cards-wrong//
this kid menace only got BALLS "half in the bag" like lance-armstrong// (get it?)
flo was a lil more chopped but still real nice on the mult and all..the Punch was sik IMO..4.0/5

20/25

Menace

I dug this fuck up to strickly prove a point that his voice isn't ever Heard or Comprehended..
Did u ever in ya life Stop N question? your not impressive I'll "stop ya message" Like Co-op Defenses!!..
^^
Damn ..well it's hella stretched..multi's in the second line helped but this sim is aight at best..3.0/5

Wit intensions so foul and obscrude leavin this soft spoken boss broken Nows He's In Two..
Far from the caution kind this guy couldn't "walk the line" like a bad faggot Pre's Balance is Screwed!!..
^^
hmm not too much tying the walk the line concept on this so punch didn't bang as hard imo..3.0/5

Don't get it twisted or confused when i'm sittin pitchin disses at this fool i always Hit the Target..
My fingers tips seem to be wat you get ripped apart wit Hows he "precise" when he'll miss regardless!
^^^
Multi and struc much better, punch is aight too..3.5/5


His verse Is ah pure example of what not to do while in Battle formation anxious Chasin Tha Win..
Instead he's depressed and suggested he's a loser cause the only thing his Parents are Erasin Is Him!!..
^^^
i would like to have seen more relating the erasin part and you need multi's in a stretched bar for such as this imo..2.5/5

With tha old age N all and this washed up waste just falls deeper continuing to Drown in Sorrow N Tears..
Fuk original his flows been Borrowed for years kill this punk got em lookin for luck cause Tomorrow is Near!!..
^^^
hmmm multi's again...punch?..2.0/5


Ya punches are barely jabs so dont brag when everybody just seen you get ya soul and Heart Diminished..
Bad time to take a nap cause infact it caused you the match! ya got ripped PRECISELY from Start To Finish!!..
^^
you used his name here wich is cool and you jacked ya rhymes back up wich helps ya flo..a decent concept IMO 3.5/5

17.5/20


this was a good battle..

This looked alot closer before i broke it down...in fact i thought it was gonna go the other way...Menaces bars are a lil too stretched during battles for my taste
def no hate in that..

Precise had some bleh lines esp the opener IMO..but his Hard hitting lines made up for it..

VOTE..Precise

[-MenaCe-]

0-1 precise..Uppin

[drunken jesus]

Precise:
im earnest on the surface... cool 007 style, but my aim with the burners perfect//
be concerned kid, i dont got a license to kill... but i do got a learners permit//
eh... seemed like filler

dont wait for it to serve its purpose.. i slay men, shit change yer name again//
soon as i take a pen... ill leave u followin prayer like the phrase "amen"//
alright

i destroy contenders droppin poison embers, off benders of sippin 'roids from blenders//
this kids coy n slender..dudes less of a menace than dennis, watch this boy surrender//
filler

a villain primed on killin time, i keystyle n drive em INSANE cause im "ill"..defined//
precise'll rhyme em into the asylum.. with the rest of the worlds "illest minds"//
alright

i'll send menace to the dentist, this shits more dangerous than tennis with lead is//
this battle? not expectin his attendance, cause my styles "built on a flow" like venice..//
alright

musta drank a 40 to battle me willingly.. hes playin his damn-cards-wrong//
this kid menace only got BALLS "half in the bag" like lance-armstrong/
liked this line

Menace:
I dug this fuck up to strickly prove a point that his voice isn't ever Heard or Comprehended..
Did u ever in ya life Stop N question? your not impressive I'll "stop ya message" Like Co-op Defenses!!..
alright

Wit intensions so foul and obscrude leavin this soft spoken boss broken Nows He's In Two..
Far from the caution kind this guy couldn't "walk the line" like a bad faggot Pre's Balance is Screwed!!..
alright

Don't get it twisted or confused when i'm sittin pitchin disses at this fool i always Hit the Target..
My fingers tips seem to be wat you get ripped apart wit Hows he "precise" when he'll miss regardless!
liked this line

His verse Is ah pure example of what not to do while in Battle formation anxious Chasin Tha Win..
Instead he's depressed and suggested he's a loser cause the only thing his Parents are Erasin Is Him!!.
filler

With tha old age N all and this washed up waste just falls deeper continuing to Drown in Sorrow N Tears..
Fuk original his flows been Borrowed for years kill this punk got em lookin for luck cause Tomorrow is Near!!..
filler

Ya punches are barely jabs so dont brag when everybody just seen you get ya soul and Heart Diminished..
Bad time to take a nap cause infact it caused you the match! ya got ripped PRECISELY from Start To Finish!!..
alright

pretty even both had a line i liked both seemed to focus more on rhyme scheme than punchs though, giving it to precise cause i liked his verse better

[Omega Bill]

2-0 Precise.

I'll give this battle until NEXT FRIDAY to be finished, otherwise the person leading in votes wins.

[P.T.R-ins]

multies-Precise
punches-tie
flow and constancy-precise
nameplay-precise(whack but is there)
creativity-menace(definitely)

precise

im earnest on the surface... cool 007 style, but my aim with the burners perfect//
be concerned kid, i dont got a license to kill... but i do got a learners permit//

no punch at all and its not even funny multes ok

dont wait for it to serve its purpose.. i slay men, shit change yer name again//
soon as i take a pen... ill leave u followin prayer like the phrase "amen"//

nameplay(whack) no punch again

i destroy contenders droppin poison embers, off benders of sippin 'roids from blenders//
this kids coy n slender..dudes less of a menace than dennis, watch this boy surrender//

finally punch tho line was dope flow constancy multie like good coffe all in 1

a villain primed on killin time, i keystyle n drive em INSANE cause im "ill"..defined//
precise'll rhyme em into the asylum.. with the rest of the worlds "illest minds"//

nice punch flow

i'll send menace to the dentist, this shits more dangerous than tennis with lead is//
this battle? not expectin his attendance, cause my styles "built on a flow" like venice..//

nothing except flow(telling some1 youll send him to dentist is not same like you PUNCH him and really do it):D

musta drank a 40 to battle me willingly.. hes playin his damn-cards-wrong//
this kid menace only got BALLS "half in the bag" like lance-armstrong// (get it?)

punch(lol better say kick ) multies ok flow ok


menace

I dug this fuck up to strickly prove a point that his voice isn't ever Heard or Comprehended..
Did u ever in ya life Stop N question? your not impressive I'll "stop ya message" Like Co-op Defenses!!

you had nice set up but you lost punch somwhere or what?didn feel this

Wit intensions so foul and obscrude leavin this soft spoken boss broken Nows He's In Two..
Far from the caution kind this guy couldn't "walk the line" like a bad faggot Pre's Balance is Screwed!!.
this punch was good and it was funny:D

Don't get it twisted or confused when i'm sittin pitchin disses at this fool i always Hit the Target..
My fingers tips seem to be wat you get ripped apart wit Hows he "precise" when he'll miss regardless

punch is good multies ok..you used his name but its not name play

His verse Is ah pure example of what not to do while in Battle formation anxious Chasin Tha Win..
Instead he's depressed and suggested he's a loser cause the only thing his Parents are Erasin Is Him!!..

huh..you fall of this one...more sinkin then flowing,multie missed,punch??

With tha old age N all and this washed up waste just falls deeper continuing to Drown in Sorrow N Tears..
Fuk original his flows been Borrowed for years kill this punk got em lookin for luck cause Tomorrow is Near!!.

i know that you rappin fast and this would for sure sound great in YOUR audio but here you fall of the flow,multie to short for this line and where is punch?

Ya punches are barely jabs so dont brag when everybody just seen you get ya soul and Heart Diminished..
Bad time to take a nap cause infact it caused you the match! ya got ripped PRECISELY from Start To Finish!!..
punch is ok,you used name but its not name play good flow


vote precise

[-MenaCe-]

3-0 KO.... Precise Wins