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Sesame Street

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Grew up expectin the worst, high school friends in the dirt
Now reppin our turf when we burn tires bending the curb
Return fire, ending your hurt, Puttin bullets in they head
Making them bleed like ink when I’m pullin my pen
You see, I’ll snatch his wallets for the Presidents in it
And put change on my fist just to knock some sense in him
Change up the speed, I’ve been dealing with pain since a seed
Aint tryin to die so I stay high cant refrain from the weed
Cant ya tell, I been livin in this shackled hell
Trying to be a father and raise my daughter as a Jazzy Belle
Tired of clappin guns and feelin like an Outkast in the Dungeon
Too much run ins, with the Law never ever saw it comin
I spit crack out the mouth, so now my jaw is numb and
Now I got ya open, volume on the next hook pumped
And Lead gets dumped leave ya checkbook slumped
I'll kill u dawg, lyrically or with tha ber-etta. its wut-eva//
cuz u kno i squeeze arms like I'm checkin my blood pressure//


Son I write with the trifeness
Engraved in Tyson
Curse the shots that left BIG and Pac lifeless
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Re: Sesame Street

Post by -MenaCe- »

This drop wasn't Bad..multies and wordplay was def there and ya stayed consistant.nice drop


keep em comin...
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Re: Sesame Street

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thanks mane
I'll kill u dawg, lyrically or with tha ber-etta. its wut-eva//
cuz u kno i squeeze arms like I'm checkin my blood pressure//


Son I write with the trifeness
Engraved in Tyson
Curse the shots that left BIG and Pac lifeless
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Re: Sesame Street

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This is Def The Weakest Verse you've Dropped ..
Multi's Was Alright .. Last Line was Straight... Keep Droppin
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Re: Sesame Street

Post by complexity »

I'm going to have to disagree with Hazard. Gutta has dropped some classics (check his profile), but this one wasn't bad either.

The first three bars alone were Vintage gutta. He brought that "come back" rhyme scheme.

Three Reasons I liked this drop.

1. Clever rhyming.

2. Simple

3. Gutta keeping his signature style.


Three Reasons I didn't like this drop.

1. The ending kind of sucked.

2. It was short.

3. Not enough gun talk.
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