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Fuck ya Superhero

Post by MOEstradamus »

listen little hero theres nothin between us...
but now ya got a zero on ya chest like gilbert arenas//

yea im bestin ya cash, while ya still flexin ya past...
out count a walkman by da times i could step on ya ass//

now ya see lil prick, the only time ya in the scripts...
is when you bitch about da shit, or kissin ruckus's dick//
(EWWWWWW)
now hes blacked out folks, and filled wit bolts...
now hes sneakin out of town like da baltimore colts//

now ive attracted him, once someones good he starts attackin them...
but if hes da best on the site, i guess no ones quite active then//

Im not like these other cats i wont be duckin ya see...
just cuz we tag teamed lady liberty your not fuckin wit me//

take dis man of steel and kill him wit kryptonite...
then reduce ya page size so for once your scripts are tight//

listen kid come test and see, and come flex on me...
but first your need more than just a lil complexity//
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decent drop man flow is there and a couple nice lines

take dis man of steel and kill him wit kryptonite...
then reduce ya page size so for once your scripts are tight//
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M.O.E wrote:listen little hero theres nothin between us...
but now ya got a zero on ya chest like gilbert arenas//

No. Horribly played.

yea im bestin ya cash, while ya still flexin ya past...
out count a walkman by da times i could step on ya ass//

Cool.

now ya see lil prick, the only time ya in the scripts...
is when you bitch about da shit, or kissin ruckus's dick//

Simple.

now hes blacked out folks, and filled wit bolts...
now hes sneakin out of town like da baltimore colts//

No idea why you made that reference.

now ive attracted him, once someones good he starts attackin them...
but if hes da best on the site, i guess no ones quite active then//

Good personal.

Im not like these other cats i wont be duckin ya see...
just cuz we tag teamed [lady liberty] your not fuckin wit me//

Good creative, subliminal, personal.

take dis man of steel and kill him wit kryptonite...
then reduce ya page size so for once your scripts are tight//

Nope. Short scripts leave a lot to be desired.

listen kid come test and see, and come flex on me...
but first your need more than just a lil complexity//

Ok. I would have left out the direct line.
Overall. A decent little diss, not bad.
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