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GUTTA AND QUIX ON THE MIX

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Aigh, Quix dah hardest out, letz tell these niKkKuhz wut we working wid Ma Nig!


Quix-
I told yah LIL nIKKUHS! i be where dah Gunz Be; imbezzled some Crack and I've done Weed!
Equiped at all time, Clip in dah Glove Box ... Double barrel shotty under the Front Seat
if yah Punk Me...yah get slit from yah Ear tah Nose, infered laserz have you Fear the Scope!
in Tears .. alone; oh and HAzzard, Stop yah Dumb puss'ass dropz...spitting fire? naw its Clear yah Don't!
i drink beer and Pro(mephisene) and smoke Sherm and Drink ... cuz i'm Hot like a Pirm in Spring
get droped by the Urban Ring, cuz when dah 'Gatz Stutter' its sounding like when Germans Sing
I'm a Attach your home and Straight up SevRe PoPs; its whatever if it means Chedder Dog!
mah Clout is REAL .. plus i've 'seen more Hoods' than Even Sweater Shops
i swing fists and bust dah Nine Nickel Too, put the barrel to your chest and watch it Ripple Through
ya'll some Lil Dudes! NIKKUH i'm 'Hood Rich' cuz i 'Stay around more Cane' than the Cripples DO
watch the Calihco Smash yah throat; Attack yah home wid the Blackest Chrome
Might GRab a stone, whip at youh Face and watch it Crack your Dome!


Gutta-
Canibal Tactics, casket and corpse crushin
the fabrics, black mask and a four bustin
out the porsche truck, when we stash, post up
leave the task force-fucked, reminiscin on the Ave's
that we had sewn up, learned how to bag blow up
See back then was different then the Game U playin
crack had niggas trippin off they suede shoe laces
In the lab for the addiction, new ways for paper
I Miss them old days before buscits and lamas
With no pay, dinner old chicken and Vodka
Niggas on the corner sold on tryin to get wit ya mama
I got my game from hearin Old niggas's drama
Losin fo-cus from the ganja, un load clips when i spot ya
This is Gutta's Life, cocking calibers to contract ya soul
Long cash, mob hats and gold, we on that fa show
I'll kill u dawg, lyrically or with tha ber-etta. its wut-eva//
cuz u kno i squeeze arms like I'm checkin my blood pressure//


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Post by The Gonz »

The flow was good on both ends. Material was EXTREMELY redundant and played on Gutta's verse. Subject matter was pretty boring even looking past the gunplay/drug king pin persona. Quix seemed more like a battle verse. The shit might be nice on a beat for a nice street joint, but I was expecting something a little more lyrical. Some of the multies could have been better and the rhyme schemes were a little bland, but it flowed nicely. I just think the topic is the weakest part of this piece. If that's how you really earn your living, fine, but bragging is only gonna get you caught.
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Post by K KiLLaH »

not necissarily but word. gutta you got a porsche truck?? but anyways i'll just get down ta bizness

gutta=4

quix=6

thats outta ten ive seen better from quix like our battle but yeah its good to see emcees get together n collab but try to make ur topic more out of the ordinary..yeah you might think real niggas go out on the block and earn money but if you look at the game that style is played out n pretty much commercial
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Post by Darth Vader »

i would give both of these a 6 just because the concept was gangster but like the other feeds said, you guys should try to focus a bit more on wordplay and subject a bit more. other than that, it seemed to flow better with the second verse for me, maybe i just can't figure out how you spit that first one...i tried it on different riffs but found it difficult to ride the beat constantly on that one. you guys are definitely good i think just play around with your style and try to develop it some more. and we'll keep feedin' ya heard?! ~1
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Re: GUTTA AND QUIX ON THE MIX

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Gutta wrote:Aigh, Quix dah hardest out, letz tell these niKkKuhz wut we working wid Ma Nig!


Quix-
I told yah LIL nIKKUHS! i be where dah Gunz Be; imbezzled some Crack and I've done Weed!
Equiped at all time, Clip in dah Glove Box ... Double barrel shotty under the Front Seat
if yah Punk Me...yah get slit from yah Ear tah Nose, infered laserz have you Fear the Scope!
in Tears .. alone; oh and HAzzard, Stop yah Dumb puss'ass dropz...spitting fire? naw its Clear yah Don't!
i drink beer and Pro(mephisene) and smoke Sherm and Drink ... cuz i'm Hot like a Pirm in Spring

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Sick.






get droped by the Urban Ring, cuz when dah 'Gatz Stutter' its sounding like when Germans Sing
I'm a Attach your home and Straight up SevRe PoPs; its whatever if it means Chedder Dog!
mah Clout is REAL .. plus i've 'seen more Hoods' than Even Sweater Shops
i swing fists and bust dah Nine Nickel Too, put the barrel to your chest and watch it Ripple Through
ya'll some Lil Dudes! NIKKUH i'm 'Hood Rich' cuz i 'Stay around more Cane' than the Cripples DO
watch the Calihco Smash yah throat; Attack yah home wid the Blackest Chrome
Might GRab a stone, whip at youh Face and watch it Crack your Dome!

^^^^^^^^^^

Pretty good. My favorite line was the cocaine one.


Gutta-
Canibal Tactics, casket and corpse crushin
the fabrics, black mask and a four bustin
out the porsche truck, when we stash, post up
leave the task force-fucked, reminiscin on the Ave's
that we had sewn up, learned how to bag blow up
See back then was different then the Game U playin
crack had niggas trippin off they suede shoe laces
In the lab for the addiction, new ways for paper
I Miss them old days before buscits and lamas
With no pay, dinner old chicken and Vodka
Niggas on the corner sold on tryin to get wit ya mama
I got my game from hearin Old niggas's drama
Losin fo-cus from the ganja, un load clips when i spot ya
This is Gutta's Life, cocking calibers to contract ya soul
Long cash, mob hats and gold, we on that fa show
On some illmatic shit right there. Good one.

I thought this was a strong collab with Quix actually having a slightly better verse.

The styles couldn't be more different that doesn't give this drop some extra flavor. I'm really surprised I missed it because I check out most collaboration drops.
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