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Perfection (Doesn't Exist)

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How many times have you glanced at your reflection just searchin/
For perfection but left feeling like less of a person/
Is it a lesson or curse when you've reached the conclusion/
That idealism is nothing more than a feat of illusion/
Its easily proven if your searching is cautious/
You'll look closer and see that no person is flawless/
I'm certain it causes a lapse in the mind/
But perhaps you will find we're a backwards design/
The attractive are blind, too crooked and shallow/
Too good for the hassle of looking in shadows/
They're cowards in spirit with their sour endearment/
So instead they focus on your outward appearance/
Now is it clear when I point to your lover/
And strip away their skin and leave the poison uncovered/
We destroy one another, ugly is tossed aside/
But the beautiful ones tuck all of these flaws inside/
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Post by complexity »

Oh. Wow. That was perfect.
The attractive are blind, too crooked and shallow/
Too good for the hassle of looking in shadows/
Besides this one bar.
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Lol I struggled with that one and wasn't sure if I should scrap but thought fuck it, its how I wrote it, leave it be. Preciate the feed though.
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Post by -MenaCe- »

Nice drop ruckus..

Im feelin the whole piece from start to finish.

Good Shit.
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sick stuff man, you know what im going to say, flow is there, concept is nice, the whole thing is quoteable
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Post by Mass Effex »

Great Drop.

Flow and multies were fantastic. It also seemed like you didn't base your lines around the rhyme.
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Thanks peeps.
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