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JHaze
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Bloodsport

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quick 16 written to mobb deep- bloodsport, sick beat, anyway....





Im tryna let it out, its like im lost for the words
should i flow for the hoes or spit smart for the nerds?
put my heart in a verse but i thirst for a fortune
who wouldnt want fame is it wourth the extortion?
be a slave to the trade and your work is recordin'
you sold your soul so now your descriptions fit the role
can you be consistent in there where you pigeonholed?
now you slippin if the bitches dont listen you missin gold
single aint hot, album flops, career is over
noone near to hold ya, its real and you keelin' over
you were high on that rush, how is it feelin sober?
see..
when you see the whole spectrum it could mess wit your perspective
so i focus on whats next and respect is the objective
molestin any skeptic, spead the message and accept it,
you lyin' bout my skill, youll be blessed when you confess it
so if rap passed on ......you can bet ill resurrect it
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Re: Bloodsport

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can you be consistent in there where you pigeonholed?
now you slippin if the bitches dont listen you missin gold
single aint hot, album flops, career is over
noone near to hold ya, its real and you keelin' over

This my favorite part. I rapped it to the beat and I gotta say the flow's good, the vocab is not too simple but not ridiculously complex. A little generic but you still did a good job making the best of it.

Nice drop overall. Keep 'em comin.
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Re: Bloodsport

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thanks man, preciate it uppin
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Re: Bloodsport

Post by The Gonz »

This shit was ill. Wished it was longer, of course. I like your style, it reminds me of myself lol. The multies were sick, vocab, flow, very ill drop.
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