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16 to Mobb Deep- wheres ya heart at

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sorry if im floodin this section but it wont be for long im just trying to get a lot done bc i have a mixtape about to drop but most of it isnt finished being recorded, thats why most of my stuff says audio text, anyway.... btw im sry if the ending isnt the best or the content this one was a quickie i just wanted to drop this tonite since i wont be on tomorrow



yo
wheres ya heart at? why you keep givin up
if you aint gettin down then you wont live it up
i been homeless enough so i dont give a fuck
its me against the world in my zone with a dutch
brain blown and im stuck but the struggle doesnt stop
the sun rises up and i hustle til it drops
and fuck the dope game, the suckers and the cops
the customers with plots, guns bustin off they shots
and moms cant understand why their son is in a box
i been wonderin' a lot but i know i gotta get it
this gift is god givin' id be sinnin if i didnt
put every minute in it and just kill it til its finished
im cynic and demented but im vivid when im ventin
relentless til the ending fuck censorship offendin'
anyone im deadly son, feel it? ready? one...
....two to the three then im killin everyone
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Re: 16 to Mobb Deep- wheres ya heart at

Post by Haz »

Yo Start a Crew With Me Niggah.


wheres ya heart at? why you keep givin up
if you aint gettin down then you wont live it up
i been homeless enough so i dont give a fuck
its me against the world in my zone with a dutch
brain blown and im stuck but the struggle doesnt stop
the sun rises up and i hustle til it drops
and fuck the dope game, the suckers and the cops
the customers with plots, guns bustin off they shots
and moms cant understand why their son is in a box
i been wonderin' a lot but i know i gotta get it
this gift is god givin' id be sinnin if i didnt

This Shit was just Nasty.. The i Can relate To The Picture U painted.
i Liked How it Built Up ..

put every minute in it and just kill it til its finished
im cynic and demented but im vivid when im ventin
relentless til the ending fuck censorship offendin'
anyone im deadly son, feel it? ready? one...
....two to the three then im killin everyone

This is Sick But Off Topic..


Anyways This Was Nasty .. Keep Droppin
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thanks for the feed mayne, i aint big on crews but im definitely down for one if were gonna do collabs n shit
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Re: 16 to Mobb Deep- wheres ya heart at

Post by Phasewon »

Dope lil verse, the structure was perfect,
as well as the flow, I pay more respect to audio
structured joints as opposed to some "textcee" shits,
the multies were simple yet effective, hot 16.
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uppin
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