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Just bored..so i grabbed one of my old songs..
it is what it is..wasnt as good back then..

I'm always on the hook cause that's my specialty and the first verse
the second verse is my homey Dyscreet, and Petrafyne ..

sorry too lazy to write the lycs right now..it's pretty straight forward though



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Post by 1 !LL B!tch »

That chorus is fire. Once I heard that it had me.
Really liked the song, the verse were pretty str8 basically
But I did find myself impatiently waiting on the chorus
Good drop
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Post by Kurse »

Def no bullshit, that hook was off the meat-rack kid! haha
But the verses were real solid, beat was pretty sick wit those synths.
I'd get off on sum shit like this sumthin fierce!
Definately a good album banger! 9.5/10...this dat shit son!

Def keep droppin and let me know when u got that free time that way we can knock a nasty one out the park! lol
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Post by - Mutual - »

this was the the hook was of it self lol
the verses were proper soild ya know
this was str8 fire keep'em comin Tre
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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Post by TreTru »

wow thanks guy's didn't expect that^^^
this was rec in early 07 late 06 ..
i made this beat on reason 3.0 but when they started recording i wasnt there so the did it at 144 bpms instead of 148...
a Tru talk tack..technically i feel i was just starting to develop
MY sound....but thanks everybody real talk..i'll return feed when i can guys..

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Post by Petrafyne »

Yeah...Game Up!
Haven't Heard This In A Minute...
I Gotta Flip This And Put My Verse 2nd.
I Hate Being Last On A Track.
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Petrafyne wrote:Yeah...Game Up!
Haven't Heard This In A Minute...
I Gotta Flip This And Put My Verse 2nd.
I Hate Being Last On A Track.
yeah i know i got the same problem...hahaha..
you comin by tonight so we can rock the last
few mixx tape joints?..did you find a different beat?
and i want another crack at that kardinal beat if anything..
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Very Old, But Can Never Forget This Shit(Even Though I'm Last). Hope We Still Got The Masters.
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