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Someday - Updated Almost There

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It's Been A Minute Since I Posted Anything, I Just Been So Busy In The Studo And Just With Life Basically, This Is A Track I Recently Put Together With Tre Tru, It's Called "Someday", All Feed Is Much Appreciated, I'll Be Back Later To Catch Up With The New Guy's And Drop Feed, Peace.

Petrafyne & Tre Tru - Someday
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1st Verse - Petrafyne
Hook - Tre Tru
2nd Verse - Tre Tru
Bridge - Petrafyne & Tre Tru
Last edited by Petrafyne on Thu Jul 30, 2009 7:29 pm, edited 4 times in total.
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Post by MOEstradamus »

it had a good beat but man it sounded sloppy but i think its becuz my speakers are fuckin up ill download it and pop on some head phones and get back at you ina bit
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This track is tight.. i liked it alot.. i rap to alot of beats like that.. it just seems to get the point out rather then the hardcore rap these days.. you both killed it. Ever into Christian rap we definitly gotta through up a track together.. Well Done
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this was aight! beat was ok. lyrics and message were aight! honestly a couple times i felt my self driftin away from the song, idk it was jus a lil slow or needed more emotion or somethin... but somethin is mos def missin in this piece. i know the vocals were low at times. any ways good message! keep it bumpin fellas
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Post by Kurse »

Shit was nice in my opinion. It had a real commercial sound about it which in turn gives it replay value. Beat and sample was sick...I love old samples like that when paired up with the right drums and the hook fit the mood as well as the concept perfectly. I'ma give it an honest 9.5 out of 10.
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It's Good To Hear Other People's Own Opinion, When It's Come's To My Shit Im Numb To It.
Deciple wrote:Ever into Christian rap we definitly gotta through up a track together.. Well Done
No But I Like To Do Deep Song's Once In A While To Express How I Feel About Certain Situations That Arise In My Life. And No Doubt Once I'm Free We Could Get Something Poppin.

Thank All That Droped Feed, And Good Hearing From Kurse Glad You Liked It. I'm Actually Doin This Song For A Producer In Germany, This Is A Version I Mixed Real Quick So He Could Have A Reference, I'll Mix A Better One Soon And Depending If His Mix Is Better I Might Post His, Peace
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Re: Someday

Post by eMCee Havic »

yeah dope homie, sick sample lyrics were tight. definatly a piece i could stand listenin to a couple times, nice drop man
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@Kurse ..Thanks homie that's exactly what we were going for with this one..a tru talk track with a wide audience appeal..

@Petrafyne shit sounds pretty good considering my throat was scratchy...im just droppin my verse and the hook in case some cant understand me...

Hook..
Someday i'll get this weight off my shoulders
Someday it'll be all over
Sometime while sittin on the corner
could be the moment i'm here no more..
nowadays when the nights get colder
i drink until i feel no hurt
so til we all~ meet again~
Someday in the end~

verse 1
used to be, youthfully, uscruitibly
best of compadres,princes on our blocks pave
youthfully, you and me could've easily
taken over with our game,unfortunate times change

now when i remeniss, what i miss, how the list
goes on foreverness, as if things were better missed
yeah i sit and wish i could reverse the clocks ticks
cause i cant stop this, emptiness my heart gets

but honestly, the rest of those times were tragedy
i commonly, regret some of my former actions deemed
but i know someday we'll be together,
hangin like old times a place similar to heaven

where all of our loved ones who crossed to new demensions
wait cuz luvz bonds you cant break those connections
so til that instant cherish every moment given
every dream you invision chase it or else you aint livin..


paste it in if you want....

all in all this song was decent you did good Tre Tru needs to step his game up a lil though...haha
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Re: Someday - Updated Almost There

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Another Official Mixtape Track. Look Out For It It Early 2010.
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