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Re: Riggz & TOYH "We Hate You!"

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Riggz you gave me that...what's his name...
Oh!!!! RA The Rugged Man vibe, I like how you tore into it tho'
especially when you got to the I Hate part
if that was on a track it'd really shine thru...nice drop

TOYH...you came thru aswell you really laced the punches, and some of the hatred together.
I felt it tho' really wow'd me (both of you that is)

the whole concept of this, and the whole collab
really came laced together....I'm suprised I didn't get a invite?
LOL just playin' either way keep writing!
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Re: Riggz & TOYH "We Hate You!"

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ThaOneYouHate wrote:Riggz
TOYH

I ain’t a bigot or prejudiced so please don’t get it twisted
It might be my sickness, but I hate all you bitches

This bar could sound real dope if the right aggression is vocalized.

If I suffer fine, but I’m color blind so face facts
Cause I hate every race whether it's whites or blacks
If you mixed, then get it fixed, no matter what you are
I’m not a serial killer, I just stalk people in parked cars

I didn't like that final line, the other ones were good.

I'll kill chinks, whitey, spades, goo backs and niggers
I'll murder European rappers, black thugs and wiggers

Good list. The verse is getting redundant now though.

Fuk Muslims and Jews, I hate Christians and Buddhists
I hate body suits, wets suits, bikinis and nudists

This was a creative bar.

They can all rot in hell, and for that matter so can Obama
To hell with Hannity. And Rush for thinkin’ he Dalai Lama

Could have been a good line, just didn't have any punch to it.

I don’t care who you are or what you do for a living
I hate the United Way for takin’ and the Red Cross for givin’

Nice.

I hate everything breathing, snot and feces producing
I hate Magic Johnson, Micheal Jordan, Larry Bird, and Patrick Ewing
I hate people who think randomly and the ones with talent
I hate anyone named Jimmy whether Hendrix or Fallon

Clever bar.

I hate jay walkers and pedestrians stopping 4 lanes of traffic
I hate sober motherfukas who complain about addicts
I hate God cause he’s superior and Satan for being lesser
I hate Serbians, IRAQies, and anyone from the desert
I hate chicks who judge cats by the price of their shirt
I hate kids who fall off bikes and then cry when it hurts
I hate cats who up threads cause the rest of them sleepin
I hate anyone planning on criticizing this shit while readin’

I don't know. Maybe some will people think your verse was a little bit simple. I think that is the main reason I enjoyed is so much though.

Good verse.


i'm Not Racist People i Just Fuckin Hate You All Tha Same
Lick My Ass Crack An Deez Nutz Bitch And Dont Stall With Brain

Alright bar.

i Gotta Nigger Hangin From Tha Front Porch You Gonna Hate Me For That?
i Fucked Your Daughter Honkey You Gonna Rape Me For That?

lol. sick

if i Was in Hitlers Situation i Woulda Burnt All Tha Jews
Walk in Tha Cinigog And Whipe My Balls With All Tha Pews

Gross again. ha

i'm Not Fascist Or Racist i'm Just Sick in Tha Head
You A Spic Bitch? Suck My Dick Then Get in Tha Bed

Semi-funny


There's Nothin i Hate More Than Gays And Queers
i'll Shove A .45 in Their Ass Hole You Still Want Foreplay Dear?

Good. Alright, I'm done breaking down these bars, I don't have much to say about them.

Fuck All These Faggots i Even Hate Tha Beatles And Queen
Yea i Abuse Drugs But i Still Hate Needles And Feinds
i'm Tryin To Be Laid Back But Niggers Keep Bringin Tha Day Back
Your Ancestors Were Enslaved? Then Find Ya Fuckin Way Back
i Hate Lupe Kanye Gnarles And Charles Barkley Now i Spark Heat
Michael irvin's A Fuckin Crack Head He's Also Dark Meat
i Still Fuckin Hate Tha Way Tom Brady Carries His Purse
House Must Be Gay Yo He Still Hasnt Married A Nurse
Fuck Muslims i'll Strap More Than A Bomb To Their Sneakers
i Woulda Sent A Nuke To Nom Fuck Tha Seekers
i'm Tired Of All Tha Slanted Eyed Pint Sized Yao Mings
i Started Thinkin i Eat Cat! That's What Kung Pao Means
And i Hate Obama Cuz He's Gonna Paint Tha White House Black
Next i Bet He'll Dig Up Tha Rose Garden To Plant A Water Melon Patch
And There's One Person Left i Hate When Tha Days Through
Plex! These Nuts Faggot! i Even Fuckin Hate You!

Just a funny, frivolous verse, that is worth reading for entertainment, obviously not the most lyrical piece ever.

Good job guys.
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Re: Riggz & TOYH "We Hate You!"

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lol this was some mad shit:D
nice work dudes..
just keep heating:D
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Re: Riggz & TOYH "We Hate You!"

Post by Haz »

I ain’t a bigot or prejudiced so please don’t get it twisted
It might be my sickness, but I hate all you bitches
If I suffer fine, but I’m color blind so face facts
Cause I hate every race whether it's whites or blacks
If you mixed, then get it fixed, no matter what you are
I’m not a serial killer, I just stalk people in parked cars
I'll kill chinks, whitey, spades, goo backs and niggers
I'll murder European rappers, black thugs and wiggers
Fuk Muslims and Jews, I hate Christians and Buddhists
I hate body suits, wets suits, bikinis and nudists


This Was the most stand of part of your verse in my eyes,
N some of it Was iffy.


i'm Not Racist People i Just Fuckin Hate You All Tha Same
Lick My Ass Crack An Deez Nutz Bitch And Dont Stall With Brain
i Gotta Nigger Hangin From Tha Front Porch You Gonna Hate Me For That?
i Fucked Your Daughter Honkey You Gonna Rape Me For That?


Lmfao This is That Gutta Newyork Style ..


if i Was in Hitlers Situation i Woulda Burnt All Tha Jews
Walk in Tha Cinigog And Whipe My Balls With All Tha Pews
i'm Not Fascist Or Racist i'm Just Sick in Tha Head
You A Spic Bitch? Suck My Dick Then Get in Tha Bed
There's Nothin i Hate More Than Gays And Queers
i'll Shove A .45 in Their Ass Hole You Still Want Foreplay Dear?


This Was Cool, Feel Like it Weakened a Lil, Could of flexed ya Creativity a Lil more


Yea i Abuse Drugs But i Still Hate Needles And Feinds
i'm Tryin To Be Laid Back But Niggers Keep Bringin Tha Day Back
Your Ancestors Were Enslaved? Then Find Ya Fuckin Way Back
i Hate Lupe Kanye Gnarles And Charles Barkley Now i Spark Heat
Michael irvin's A Fuckin Crack Head He's Also Dark Meat

Lmao got Funny Towards the End , Good humor


Fuck Muslims i'll Strap More Than A Bomb To Their Sneakers
i Woulda Sent A Nuke To Nom Fuck Tha Seekers
i'm Tired Of All Tha Slanted Eyed Pint Sized Yao Mings
i Started Thinkin i Eat Cat! That's What Kung Pao Means
And i Hate Obama Cuz He's Gonna Paint Tha White House Black
Next i Bet He'll Dig Up Tha Rose Garden To Plant A Water Melon Patch


IGNORANT SON OF A BITCH LMAOO
yo you Def Captured The Highlight Of this Collab n just The 'Topic with That ^..



And There's One Person Left i Hate When Tha Days Through
Plex! These Nuts Faggot! i Even Fuckin Hate You!



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Overall This was Entertaining ..
Jj you went in lol
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Re: Riggz & TOYH "We Hate You!"

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I think TOYH shined on this one.. nice punches for a topical verse. The Enslaved/find your way back line had me rolling...

Riggz came off kind of rambling in a tantrum sort of way... with more effort he could've made this a shiner... flow was nice, few off syllables here n there but all around nice effort.

(Hell, if you can't laugh at yourself... you're an ass)

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