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Yo Beast Wit These Bars-
Flow Sick Tested Positive For Sars
Stay Close To The Streets Like The Bottom Of Some Cars
Ha Yea Did I Forget To Mention When I get Bad Intentions
Raise The Tension You'll Get Smoked Like A Bad Engine
You Confused And Why? You Lose You Die Graves Where Fools Reside
Like Erasing The 9th Letter in The alphabet you lose and "Eye"
Cuz Piff The Alpha And Omega Go "Blow" For "Blow" I Got More Than Noreaga
Do Piff A Favor Keep Good Behavor Or Imma Hang Across/cross A T Like Our Savior!
Cuz You Betta Flee Ock Especially When You See Shots
Cuz When The Heat Pop Ya Crew Spread Like A Peecock.
Cuz Its A Golden Groove, Spoke Forsooth
A Self Hated Cloak'd Truth Broken Rules
While Niggaz Too Outspoken Youre Too Radical
There Thoughts Too Erratic Too Sporadical
Get Off Your Oxymoronic Backwards Pedestal
You're Too Dramatic Too Much An Actor Pathetic
Who You? See How Flow Switch You More Shit
Hold This is Joe Piff And Infinte BITCH!
We Juxtaposed I'm Eagle Eyed See My Target And Lock In The Talons
Me And Piff Failing Is Like An Earthquake On People Something You Cant Fathom
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
My Rhymes Got You Enervating And My Rants Will Smash Your Face In
Lands The Complications It's Inevitable I Still Get Enhanced Adulation
Mayne I Effervesse Anger While You Fail At Trying To Emulate Me
But Your Image Is Evananescent You Trail As I Rennovate Free's
Act Prudent & Rancorous From A Far You Steppin To Nonsence
Selected With Prosperity Thats How Come I Give Intrepid Responses
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I Scrutinize Haters But Remain Tactful To Substantiate Writtens
Man We Hate Systems Superfluous We Hand In Like Victims
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect
Watch Out Joey & Mutual Stay In Neutral And We First On The Decks
Worked To Perfect Lines,This Cross,Torn Like The Church Was Wrecked
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect
We Juxtaposed I'm Eagle Eyed See My Target And Lock In The Talons
Me And Piff Failing Is Like An Earthquake On People Something You Cant Fathom
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
^^^^I don't know who that is....but I dug that
a very nice piece kept the mixture dope
the vocab was off the chain
and the collab came of more then decent
nice way to attack the concept!
Infinite has updated his style immensely since joining the site. I can tell that he is quite competitive for being able to elevate so fast and wants to be able to compete with the best on here. He might easily take the award for "Most Improved" 09, if someone like Menace doesn't snatch it. I thought your verse was strong with some moments of greatness, and some not so hype moments.
Joey Piff, I liked your verse, the wordplay was decent (work on improving it) and the multis were good. One of my favorite verses from you.
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect
This was some good shit. Piff, you had some decent punches in there but I think they coulda been worded a bit better. Still pretty good though. Both of yer flows were straight. Good multies and rhyme schemes. Mutual you definitely shined on this one. Lotta vocab and slick rhyme schemes. Was diggin that vacancy line. Good shit yall.
Thanks Ruckus I Was A Lil Amazed At The "Vacant" Line I Thought Damm That Aint Bad Anyway Thanks
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect
Yea, Mutual.. I see you been hangin around Plex and Ruckus too damn long... haha.. but you came quite smooth with the vocab...(Keep building without losing your originality)
Piff - I dug your punches, would've reworded some of the phrases personally to give it more kick and flow smoother, but it was nice none-the-less.
I enjoy reading collabs... I really do.. they bring out the best in folks. LOL.
Hanging Around With Plex And Ruckus Is a Good Thing I'm Assuming
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect
To start, I'll say I felt both pieces for the most part.
-Joey Piff's had choppy flow, maybe it was written to a beat in a weird style, or you just need to clean up the number of syllables and just flow in general. Punches were above average.
-Mutual, nice flow, loved the multies, vocab, just all the specifics were well addressed, well done.
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect
Joey Piff`s verse was cool. flowed perfectly and had some nice punchlines.
i cant believe how much mutual has improved. the vocab is very impressive but you overdone it. im not the most intelligent but im far from dumb and i didnt get a lot of that verse. id bet 90% of readers would be the same if their honest. as i said its impressive and im jealous of your knowledge of vocab (or dictionary reading skills) but it kinda makes it difficult to take anything from your verse.
Most Of The Words In There Are Words My English Teacher Taught Us Because We Needed To Write A Story And Vocab Gets A Better Mark lol
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect
