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Shout Box Cypher...Ruckus and MenaCe

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A Cypher With MenaCe and Ruckus..You should be able to tell who's who...Enjoy




im unorthodox like a whore who's judgemental/
i'll leave an emcee with no class like they returned a tux rental/
There's a crack in the floor that i happen to store and i love to Shove Vets Thru!!
guess who!? the possessed dude with a tech, dressed in a wet suit/
forget all the bless yous, i left clues for these weak cats/
the lex flew like a jet boost right through the speed trap
That'll get there Knees Cracked down to the point like plex's Feed back
So strange and obstrube you could be obamas seed and i see no changin in you
i'm heinous its true, insane like eatin brains in yer soup
heart racin in two's..Gettin shit poured on my victims like im Basting Mah Food!!
break shit into laments for dudes, i'm simply a genius/
This be the meanest..Your career will always be under me you gotta lift me to see it!!..
a gypsy, a pheonix, shit i'm a mix of da vinci and jesus/
We on another level you gotta get air lifted to reach it!!
we're beasts, so deep and heavy fedex wont ship or receive us
my spittin is frequent, thats how ruck is nasty
all ya Assumptions are Trash see..where the Fucks You Can't Beat!!
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Re: Shout Box Cypher...Ruckus and MenaCe

Post by Phasewon »

would have been better if I could tell which cat
spit what, but in any case, shit was an ill cypher,
yall cats played off of each other so well that this
could have been written by one dude and I wouldn't
have noticed a difference, multies was poppin, punches
was hot, def' on point for some cyph shit.
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The lines that flowed in the word play were Ruckus
The lines with punchlines and similies were Menace

I liked.

This would be a good concept for 4 different type styles too.
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not bad, i couldnt tell who was who thru the whole thing but a couple lines there were pretty obvious

im a big fan of reading cyphers more so than scriptures lol, so good shit i enjoyed it
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Ruckus
Menace


im unorthodox like a whore who's judgemental/
i'll leave an emcee with no class like they returned a tux rental/

There's a crack in the floor that i happen to store and i love to Shove Vets Thru!!
guess who!? the possessed dude with a tech, dressed in a wet suit/
forget all the bless yous, i left clues for these weak cats/
the lex flew like a jet boost right through the speed trap

That'll get there Knees Cracked down to the point like plex's Feed back
So strange and obstrube you could be obamas seed and i see no changin in you

i'm heinous its true, insane like eatin brains in yer soup
heart racin in two's..Gettin shit poured on my victims like im Basting Mah Food!!
break shit into laments for dudes, i'm simply a genius/
This be the meanest..Your career will always be under me you gotta lift me to see it!!..
a gypsy, a pheonix, shit i'm a mix of da vinci and jesus/
We on another level you gotta get air lifted to reach it!!
we're beasts, so deep and heavy fedex wont ship or receive us
my spittin is frequent, thats how ruck is nasty
all ya Assumptions are Trash see..where the Fucks You Can't Beat!!

That should help lol
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Thnx For The Feed Fellaz!!
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This was a Pretty Decent Cypher..


Def Had Standout Lines, Both keep Droppin
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Thnx For The Feed....Uppin!!
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Re: Shout Box Cypher...Ruckus and MenaCe

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-MenaCe- wrote:A Cypher With MenaCe and Ruckus..You should be able to tell who's who...Enjoy




im unorthodox like a whore who's judgemental/
i'll leave an emcee with no class like they returned a tux rental/

[dope line]

There's a crack in the floor that i happen to store and i love to Shove Vets Thru!!
guess who!? the possessed dude with a tech, dressed in a wet suit/

[real dope line]

forget all the bless yous, i left clues for these weak cats/
the lex flew like a jet boost right through the speed trap

[nice]

That'll get there Knees Cracked down to the point like plex's Feed back
So strange and obstrube you could be obamas seed and i see no changin in you
i'm heinous its true, insane like eatin brains in yer soup

[guess that was pretty sick too]

heart racin in two's..Gettin shit poured on my victims like im Basting Mah Food!!
break shit into laments for dudes, i'm simply a genius/
This be the meanest..Your career will always be under me you gotta lift me to see it!!..



a gypsy, a pheonix, shit i'm a mix of da vinci and jesus/
We on another level you gotta get air lifted to reach it!!

[Kind of repetitive, that first line was ridiculous though]

we're beasts, so deep and heavy fedex wont ship or receive us
my spittin is frequent, thats how ruck is nasty
all ya Assumptions are Trash see..where the Fucks You Can't Beat!!

[alright]


Nice collab, I enjoyed this, I'd like to see a lot more of it.
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