Shiobock Vs Quix

[Shiobock]

5-12 bars
May the best man win, good luck.. i`l post soon

-- Wed Dec 16, 2009 5:31 am --

Imma start to trample this hostage, how can you think your actually hot bitch?
when almost half of ya god damn battles are losses!
hear the glock click, BOOM, ya traitor, Yous a hater
and for that, i`l snap q easily like an angry snooker player
screw ya, faker, shio got the best material
if you think you "fly" i`l slam you in a "nest quix" like the breakfast cereal (nesquicks)
you will die cousin,you`l always stay textin so its do or die pumkin
cause once you off the top, your gone and dead like suicide jumpin
youre taking a thumpin, your lines aint very tight, over stretched like cellulite
just a lot of babblin with no punches like 2 kids scared to fight!
pussy! keep talkin trash you got awful raps and im off the map
so do us a favour, go play with petrol and i`ll toss the match
your gone and passed,for talkin shit i`m oweing you a spank
so watch me start throwin him my hands and put some god damn "wait in q" like goin to the bank
i`m never stoppin this killin, so just duck, dive!
cause you`l never overcome shi like when you talkin to women!


lol meh

[Quix]

not bad


Be carefull who you battle, mah text Famous; mah punches kill n mah Tek Ranges!
let me Explain-Kid; I'll Bend mah Speech n put an 'End to Shi' Faster than Sex Changes
Next time, do your homework i'm Profound when i'm Spittin; yous a Clown you should Quit-Men!
How am i supposed tah take you serious when 'This kid BOCK' sounds like a Chicken (Bock Bock Bock lol)
Dog, Watch me Rip Apart his Traits; leave your face in the dirt nigguh hows the Garden Taste?
when i 'Kok n squeeze you'll drop like Fleas' so watch his 'Shoulders Jerk back' like the Harlem Shake
i got no Desire tah Take your Garbage! Your a waiste of time, i Inspire dah Greats wid Karnage!
let me apologize in advance, that i made you Retire the very same day you started! (He Signed up today)
I'm a Damage SHI; and leave your body melted under the sun on a Cabana Beach
and dog, I'm not sure how i possible but you seem to 'Cover more Ass' than fuckin Bannana Seats (pointless content in his verses)
Thought he was decent, but i must admit he's a fool, its a Bummer; now i'm Schoolin this Dumb-herb!
this Tool is in one word, Pathetic, cuz the 'Only Fans you got' are to keep you cool in the Summer
you believe your more Technical?? Doubt it! you on soo much Dick, we call you Testicle Mouth Kid;
and if you thought you would win this?? watch me 'Shock this kid' like an ElectRical Outlet!


g'luck

[Frank Black]

o shit lol nice battle i will edit with vote shortly.

[-MenaCe-]

Shiobock:


Imma start to trample this hostage, how can you think your actually hot bitch?
when almost half of ya god damn battles are losses!
Ok Opener..7/10
hear the glock click, BOOM, ya traitor, Yous a hater
and for that, i`l snap q easily like an angry snooker player
Na...4/10
screw ya, faker, shio got the best material
if you think you "fly" i`l slam you in a "nest quix" like the breakfast cereal (nesquicks)
NO...nesquik is choclate milk not cereal...2/10
you will die cousin,you`l always stay textin so its do or die pumkin
cause once you off the top, your gone and dead like suicide jumpin
Ok....7/10
youre taking a thumpin, your lines aint very tight, over stretched like cellulite
just a lot of babblin with no punches like 2 kids scared to fight!
LOL...Ok LIne 7/10
pussy! keep talkin trash you got awful raps and im off the map
so do us a favour, go play with petrol and i`ll toss the match
Nice....9/10
your gone and passed,for talkin shit i`m oweing you a spank
so watch me start throwin him my hands and put some god damn "wait in q" like goin to the bank
Na...4/10
i`m never stoppin this killin, so just duck, dive!
cause you`l never overcome shi like when you talkin to women!
Weak Closer...5/10




Overall: 45/80





Quix:




Be carefull who you battle, mah text Famous; mah punches kill n mah Tek Ranges!
let me Explain-Kid; I'll Bend mah Speech n put an 'End to Shi' Faster than Sex Changes
Good Opener...8/10
Next time, do your homework i'm Profound when i'm Spittin; yous a Clown you should Quit-Men!
How am i supposed tah take you serious when 'This kid BOCK' sounds like a Chicken (Bock Bock Bock lol)
Funny but weak....4/10
Dog, Watch me Rip Apart his Traits; leave your face in the dirt nigguh hows the Garden Taste?
when i 'Kok n squeeze you'll drop like Fleas' so watch his 'Shoulders Jerk back' like the Harlem Shake
Nice....9/10
i got no Desire tah Take your Garbage! Your a waiste of time, i Inspire dah Greats wid Karnage!
let me apologize in advance, that i made you Retire the very same day you started! (He Signed up today)
Good....8/10
I'm a Damage SHI; and leave your body melted under the sun on a Cabana Beach
and dog, I'm not sure how i possible but you seem to 'Cover more Ass' than fuckin Bannana Seats
(pointless content in his verses)
LOL....OK 6/10
Thought he was decent, but i must admit he's a fool, its a Bummer; now i'm Schoolin this Dumb-herb!
this Tool is in one word, Pathetic, cuz the 'Only Fans you got' are to keep you cool in the Summer
Nice Punch...9/10
you believe your more Technical?? Doubt it! you on soo much Dick, we call you Testicle Mouth Kid;
and if you thought you would win this?? watch me 'Shock this kid' like an ElectRical Outlet!
Nice Closer....9/10




Overall: 53/70








Quix i feel just came with harder and more direct punches...





V/Quix

[Arvincible]

shiobock's got some talent

but quix took this one easily.
the harlem shake line made me chuckle

quix ur flow is a bit forced at some points though

[Shiobock]

lol believe me if i sat and took some time to write this stuff.. i just dont really, or i CANT really get into this.. lol.. its much better saying it face to face, this stuffs..blah lol. no hate tho!

[Riggz]

Well Shi, there's always audio battles (which I haven't seen in awhile.. but would very interested in participating in)... anywayz.. you kno you didn't come hard on this one so its no doubt why you takin' the L here.. even tho I needed a GPS to find my way back from Quix's mile long bars.. he did have some hella-fied (if that's a word) punches.

As corny as that "Bock" line was, it had me rollin' when i said it outloud.

Vote = Quix

I hate I missed the early days of audio battles with Tre Tru, "Dead Silence" and Big P ( the funniest battle ever that I saved on my harddrive)

[Mass Effex]

Vote:Quix

Pretty much a better verse in all ways, except for flow. Better multies, personals, all that. ShioBock you got potential, just keep workin' at it, the problem was just the fact you battled someone a more experienced than you. Quix was my 2nd battle too, and I've gotten much better since, which I'm sure you will.


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[Cee4]

Imma start to trample this hostage, how can you think your actually hot bitch?
when almost half of ya god damn battles are losses!
^^^^
simple but effective. these kind of personal punches definitly do damage 7/10

hear the glock click, BOOM, ya traitor, Yous a hater
and for that, i`l snap q easily like an angry snooker player
^^^^
im sure the cue punch has been used before but your new so you get the benefit of the doubt...7/10

screw ya, faker, shio got the best material
if you think you "fly" i`l slam you in a "nest quix" like the breakfast cereal (nesquicks)
^^^^
nice attmept, creative but it didnt work for me..5/10

you will die cousin,you`l always stay textin so its do or die pumkin
cause once you off the top, your gone and dead like suicide jumpin
^^^^
far too basic..4/10


youre taking a thumpin, your lines aint very tight, over stretched like cellulite
just a lot of babblin with no punches like 2 kids scared to fight!
^^^^
first line was better. yhan the second but neither was great...5/10


pussy! keep talkin trash you got awful raps and im off the map
so do us a favour, go play with petrol and i`ll toss the match
^^^^
this was decent. nothing too clever but it was cool...6/10

your gone and passed,for talkin shit i`m oweing you a spank
so watch me start throwin him my hands and put some god damn "wait in q" like goin to the bank
^^^^
kinda played but its still ok. at leastn its direct..6/10

i`m never stoppin this killin, so just duck, dive!
cause you`l never overcome shi like when you talkin to women!
^^^
nah weak closer..4/0

overall you had some nice attempts at nampley, some decent punchines and a good flow. you had some weak punchlines and a lot of indirect bars...44/80

Quix
Be carefull who you battle, mah text Famous; mah punches kill n mah Tek Ranges!
let me Explain-Kid; I'll Bend mah Speech n put an 'End to Shi' Faster than Sex Changes
^^^
nice direct punchline...8/10

Next time, do your homework i'm Profound when i'm Spittin; yous a Clown you should Quit-Men!
How am i supposed tah take you serious when 'This kid BOCK' sounds like a Chicken (Bock Bock Bock lol)
^^^
nah. wasnt feeling this bar at all...4/10


Dog, Watch me Rip Apart his Traits; leave your face in the dirt nigguh hows the Garden Taste?
when i 'Kok n squeeze you'll drop like Fleas' so watch his 'Shoulders Jerk back' like the Harlem Shake
^^^^
nice. both lines of this bar were dope...8/10

i got no Desire tah Take your Garbage! Your a waiste of time, i Inspire dah Greats wid Karnage!
let me apologize in advance, that i made you Retire the very same day you started! (He Signed up today)
^^^^
effective but a bit simple. could have been more complex...7/10

I'm a Damage SHI; and leave your body melted under the sun on a Cabana Beach
and dog, I'm not sure how i possible but you seem to 'Cover more Ass' than fuckin Bannana Seats (pointless content in his verses)
^^^^
ok, nothing special...6/10

Thought he was decent, but i must admit he's a fool, its a Bummer; now i'm Schoolin this Dumb-herb!
this Tool is in one word, Pathetic, cuz the 'Only Fans you got' are to keep you cool in the Summer
^^^^
a bit played..6/10

you believe your more Technical?? Doubt it! you on soo much Dick, we call you Testicle Mouth Kid;
and if you thought you would win this?? watch me 'Shock this kid' like an ElectRical Outlet!
^^^^
played again..6/10

Quix you have excellent punchlines but your concepts can be a bit played somethimes like "shock you like electricity"...etc. you do put your spin on them but its the same concept at the end of the day...


Shiobock - 44
Quix - 45

it actually wasnt close as it looks coz Shibock had one more bar. if Quix had matched it would have been more comfortable and i would say it was a cat sweep but both came decent.

[Shiobock]

a lot more experience than me? lol i been here for ages dawg.. i used to take a long time on these battles bringin up some raw shit, but i just key somethin up in in 5-10 minutes now.. im sure this battle could be like, 50x better from both of us to be honest lol., thanks fr votes amigos

[Absolute]

You do got potential though. gotta learn difference between text battles and freestyle battle though. Online you can take your time, plan, be complex. IRl..well we know how that is, everything and anything goes, complexity just a plus. Here its needed..but the quickness of real life battlin mixed with the complexity of online will make ANYONE a better overall MC..

[Quix]

close n update!! thanks for voting ya'll!

[Ambiguous Realm]

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