Shiobock vs absolute

[Shiobock]

4-8 bars



Im droppin this plank, you suck, its obvious man
so watch me take "loot" like i was robbin a bank
you come with the sloppiest plans, keep bringin ya wack words
you "C", "B" couldnt bring his "A" game if he was sayin the alphabet backwards
idiot, your a phoney guy, trex, you`l only die next!
after i put the heat to your ass, leavin you pumped up like ronnie colemans biceps
why test? you get fucked so much you got a sore ass
so watch me leave abs tore apart like an intense core class

[Absolute]

My bad, my access to the net is limited. I'll drop asap though...

(edited to add verse)


Decent Drop…

But….


I Will bash your skull, and since he got a “Shy“ flow, Ill beat this nigga with my eyes-closed!
I wont lie though, I Doubt your survival! He like The Windy City , n we all know “Shi blows!”

Allow me to remind those….The flow level leave you below-sea, explode-heat, not even Mario be like “Yo-Shi!”/
Call me “Lightning Mc-clean”!! Since this nigga says he “rusty” like Tom Magliozzi!/2

Oppose me? Exchange Audio punches point-blank, then change, all the ‘B---SH--” in his verse and-name and battling this nigga becomes like a “video-game!”*/3 [lol..FPS anyone? ]

Feelin the Payne? Dyslexic Actor how I flip scripts and rip this clit like vaginal pierce-ings/
I Paul Pierce-things, and put Shi “under my wing“, now “Bock” has “Air over (his) G string”/4**


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*Switch around the b and sh in his name it becomes “bioshock” …smh come on people.
**Air on the G string + Sabastian Bach…you look it up. Dont understand dont vote..


Uppin 4 Votes..


-- Sun Dec 20, 2009 12:12 pm --

Uppin, lets get some votes in...

[Arvincible]

this was an okay battle, i didnt like how alot of the punches seemed forced..heres the basic cats i go by..
the flow was iffy for both ends as well

punches - Absolute
personals - Absolute..better attempts at his name
flow - i liked Absolute's multis and flow more but both need work.
wordplay - Shiobock got his closer and 2nd bar for this
Entertainment - Absolute

I favored his more because of the creativity.. it really beat the "loot" line that shiobock had, but hey uve got a steady structure man, all u need is more creative punches and wordplays and ull kill it.

vote goes to Absolute

1-0

[Absolute]

1-0 My way, Uppin for more..

[Mass Effex]

Wordplay/Nameplay-Absolute
Flow-Absolute, SB, you stretched your bars a little too much
Personals-Tie
Entertainment-Tie
Punches-Absolute

Vote-Absolute

Shiobock, that had some great potential in it, both of ya'll need to keep working in fact, alright battle, Absolute had a lot of expected name play, but were clever as far as expected nameplay is concerned. Nothing really jumped out at me, but time and effort will change everything.

[Absolute]

yeah, I aint battled in I dunno how long. tryin to shake the cobwebs... 2-0 my way..Uppin

[360]

I vote for Absolute, but I didn't think his work was far greater than Shiobock's.

Both were decent reads, but I agree with Arvincible when he said both flows could be better.

[Quix]

Punches - Abs
Personals - Abs, Tryed more!
Floww - tie
wordplay - Shi
Entertainment - Abs
vote - Abs

HAd a better all around verse, better flow, punches nameplay normally will get my vote!!


vote - Abs

[Absolute]

Good lookin out, guess that concludes this session. And btw, Shio that core class line, while kinda played, was dope.. nice battle..

Abso

[Arvincible]

someone close and update and move this shit out

[Ambiguous Realm]

-closed-
-records updated-