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2 Close 2 Me Feat. Loon E Lou, Young Maverick & Kurse

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2 Close 2 Me Feat. Loon E Lou, Young Maverick & Kurse

Post by HKX »

Happy New Years 2 everyone on illest. Thought I post up a track 4 ya'll since it's 2010. Dis track will be goin' on da Feel Da Pain album which is completed I'm jus pending on the cover 2 be done. Hope u enjoy da track.

1st Verse: HKX
2nd Verse: Loon E Lou
3rd Verse: Young Maverick
4th Verse: Kurse



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Post by Young K »

The hook fits perfectly with this beat, hot shit...

Everyone's flow is on point, no complaining about this...

Lyrically this was alright, wasn't really the track someone would show their lyrical skills on...

Quality is perfect; this jaun is a banger man.
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Post by Lawgix »

this beat is fire reminds me of some sequence music they'd use on The Cosby Show haha

HKX - your verse is fire!! delivery is on flow is on
"don't wanna be ya babys daddy and i ain't jokin" haha

Loon - ur verse was much better than the previous verse i heard from ya fam... good shit flow on point delivery is on point and lyrics is tight too

Mav - i liked ur flow in this man for real... "don't expect me to be kissin u publicly" haha i liked it man... good shit

Kurse - like the flow u had on this track man... haha delivery is pretty sick fam... good shit homie!!!

hook is tight too... like it alot haha... AME!!!!

good shit fellas give it a 9/10 shits sick yo!!!!!! good way to kick off the new year!!!
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Post by Riggz »

I was bobbin to it... delivery was on point by all 4. I think Loony's track was a little bit distored. Flow was there. Loved the hook. I actually liked Mav's verse the best but I thought his flow was a tad bit off at the end.

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this was fly ma niccas lmao! everything was good money.

sound like some back in day young gunz shit man
yall all did yall thing beat was dope!
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This Track Is Sick!! All Did Ya Thing Mav Impressive Shit Right There Mayne Waitin On The Album Shit Will Be Dope
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Shit Was ill Fellaz all def dropped some hot Ish..Good Job i was feelin this
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I wanna thank everyone 4 da feedback really appreciate it. I'll leave feedback 4 those who left me feedback once I get home.
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Post by YungDosia »

HKX...dont say ull murder my beats again...

lyrics are elementary to the max..

quality is prety good

chorus vocal quality is bad...


2nd guys voice is really annoying lol...

3rd guys voice is ok...lyrics ok also...best verse in song.

4th guys ok...lyrics elementary


overall track is pretty bad guys...honestly


3rd verse is the best
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funny how Yung is da only person talkin shit bout dis track cuz he got booty hurt bout me givin' an opinion bout his now he's like 3rd verse is da best on da track....
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Post by YungDosia »

im not hurt at all by ur comments seems like u are tho...

3rd verse was honestly the best...

H if u were good i would tell u....rhymes are way to pre-schoolish.
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lol I ain't hurt I'm jus laughin' right now haha
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Post by TreTru »

beats got that bump nice on that jazzy tip...

Hook?..this worked wid da track..

First Verse...good Deliv as always..smooth on da flo..nice

second Verse..trippy voice...coo swag..delivs decent..

Third Verse..lyrically niice, scheme is good too..nice change up...

4th verse..nice swag..cool change ups...i like how you tweak ya flo a lil on each drop..dope as usual..i prefer hearin more multi's..but you brought the sic flo wich made up for it..

Ya'll's drops are always Good..this was no different..1
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good lookin' on da feed Tre imma leave u sum feed once I get home
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