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My Town My City...

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Vocals are not mixed all the way yet...

this is going on my solo album dropping this summer! all original beats from my producer Paktraxx. need beats he got thousands holla at me and i will holla at him!

mixtape will be out sooner..!!

My Fav Line from this song

"Im Higher then kite, im flyer then a flight...Im the fire then the fight, spittin fire in the mic.."

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okay listenin now...

don't like the auto tune on the intro... but auto tune is played out majorly... it sounded like it wasn't on key... lyrics are okay... not as good as ur last track... IMO... beats cool... the Wayne thing is kinda boring to listen too... it was okay... overall its okay except the auto tune sucked... to be quite honest...
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there was only auto tune in the first 5 seconds lol...
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it still didn't sound good...
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thats fine...but dont tlk shit bout my track just cuz its a 5 second period of auto tune thats just stupid...
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Yomommaspimp wrote:Dosia wins everything...there's a video on youtube where chuck norris attempts to roundhouse kick youngdosia...sadly chuck is in the hospital with a broken leg.

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i could just say ur whole track was garbage... but no i only thought the auto tune was trash...
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lol...k buddy
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Yomommaspimp wrote:Dosia wins everything...there's a video on youtube where chuck norris attempts to roundhouse kick youngdosia...sadly chuck is in the hospital with a broken leg.

DOSIA THE GOAT!
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Re: My Town My City...

Post by Mass Effex »

Intro sucked, it sounded off the way the lead is played, sounds like it's studdering, when it should have been quantized better, but I know that's not in your control, so no sweat. Wayne hook got old, you should have switched it up a little and added a different line from him to add a little breakdown. Beat is cool, except for this one part of the intro and chorus high techno lead I said that didn't sound smooth. Nice breakdowns during the beats. Good shit, lyrics weren't too simple, but not too complex either. Your rapping voice is alright. Not really my style, but I didn't base my feed off of that. Keep dropping.
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Thanks for feed
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Yomommaspimp wrote:Dosia wins everything...there's a video on youtube where chuck norris attempts to roundhouse kick youngdosia...sadly chuck is in the hospital with a broken leg.

DOSIA THE GOAT!
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