Lawgix - Scott Helpless (Scott Elkins Diss)

[Lawgix]

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okay so pretty much this dudes a fuckin chump... he'd rather hold his child support payments for fuckin ransom for his TWO YEAR OLD DAUGHTER for his mic to start rappin again... and hes not even that good... so he said some dumb shit on facebook towards my brothers soon to be wife like "well all of your 'friends' can see MY daughter but i can't? thats fucked up" and all i said was Deez Nutz! and he fuckin went off so i decided to shut his ass up... and made this big shout outs to the homie Lifted 1 for mixing n mastering it!!! came out smooth i think let me know!!!!

[Riggz]

This wasn't one of your best.. I feel you didn't ride the beat as you usually do. The dis was ok, but it seemed like you were just ready to get the shit over with by the end of the verse (maybe it was all that shit talkin' you did in the beginning LOL)... none the less.. you know ya boy peeped it. And I'm just glad to see you representin' as always bwoy!

I should smack you for saying "get some tissue for your issues" LOL!

[Kurse]

I agree partially with Riggz that I've heard you diss niggaz harder than this before. (funny cuz the chamber is being flooded with diss tracks lately...alot of animosity out there I see lol) Anywayzzzz...the hook could've used some work, but as far as the verses were concerned, your lyrics and vocals were smoother and more on-point in those areas.

I'd have to say my favorite bar on the whole joint was the "do I have to remind you that eating fried chicken won't help you change your skin pigmant" ...something along those lines. That shit had me rollin for a moment.

Decent drop...keep doin ya thang bruh.

[Petrafyne]

Wow A Soundclick Player Finally. I Thought This Was Dope, I Can See Your Confidence Building Up With Every Track. I Liked The Beat A Lot And The Rhythm You Did Really Matched The Tone Of This Track. Slipped Of Time In A Couple Spots But I Can See In The Future You'll Be Banging Out Flawless Tracks.

[Lawgix]

thanx for all the feedback... i do agree with Kurse and Riggz... i should have come harder in this i know... but we were in the studio for like 3 hours prior to this song and i did some tracks for my collabs n shit... so i had alot of energy drained outta my system haha... no excuse i know but i was like "fuck man i gotta break for a bit" haha... neways i see where u guys were talkin about the hook... i agree that it sucks... theres parts i finally found that i slipped up on during my verse... and yeah P... i am gettin more confident in the studio... my producer helps me with shit n i guess i had an off night haha... but thanx for the honest feedback i promise i won't go crying like a lil bitch cause Riggz n Kurse said it wasn't the best they heard from me... haha... newayz keep the feed comin!!!!

uppin...

[TreTru]

nice presence off the intro..

i like the beat..goes hard

first verse ..good presence high quality shit..a cpl lil flo juggles

2nd Verse..Flo starts out pretty strong deliv too..but
Hook i actually like the hook ..accept the lil slips.

2nd Verse..Flo starts out pretty strong deliv too..cpl juggles though

3rd Verse..the Harmonies were cool for the most part

honestly your still doin better than before..but you should work on your vowel transfers a lil imo..your rhyme scheme stretches over the 4 once in a while.but your rythm is usually pretty tight..no H8 just tryin to help you reach the next level...Stay Grindin..1

[Lawgix]

nah never any hate homie... i take anything and everything into consideration... thanx for the feedback!!! keep it comin...