Just a Thought.

[Haz]

Hooked on Something You Don't Quite Get Yet..
Wonder If You'll Have To Bounce With Regret Left..
Waiting On This Phone Call i Feel Like ima Hit The Lottery
Am i Sensitive If It Bothers Me? Nah Cause Outbursts Logically
Turn Each ya Steps Inta ya Souls Pottery..Till You offer Galleries
That Kepted You Balanced Like a Salary..Tell Me Who Fathaed Me?
I Stare At The The Sun Like Theres More To Life i Gotta See...
I Needa Shine But Thought Of You Hollering Bleeds My Mind..
Are You Gunna Relieve My Time? Was That The Plan Or Do i Need a Sign?
Do i Need To Stop Cause I'm Talking Crazy ??
Do I Need a Stray Jacket or a Walk In Baby ??
Railly the Vibes are like Isralies,Blowing Up Bloody Merry
Scary, I Should Just Relieve The Cherry N Put The Spark Out
Its 2:40 in The Morning its Pretty Fucking Dark Out
Nighttime Tripping On a Dark Route, Sorry if i Bark Out
I'm Far from a Dog..If u Wanna just Keep Moving i'm not Down to Live in a Parked House ..

[NoVeL]

Crack as usual..I expect nothin less from my sensei

ThoUghT
Food 4 ThoUghT N E 1?

[- Mutual -]

Hooked on Something You Don't Quite Get Yet..
Wonder If You'll Have To Bounce With Regret Left..

Not Bad Opener

Waiting On This Phone Call i Feel Like ima Hit The Lottery
Am i Sensitive If It Bothers Me? Nah Cause Outbursts Logically
Turn Each ya Steps Inta ya Souls Pottery..Till You offer Galleries
That Kepted You Balanced Like a Salary..Tell Me Who Fathaed Me?
I Stare At The The Sun Like Theres More To Life i Gotta See...

Mayne This Had Some Nice Lines Nice Last Line Here Especially

I Needa Shine But Thought Of You Hollering Bleeds My Mind..
Are You Gunna Relieve My Time? Was That The Plan Or Do i Need a Sign?

Aye Nice Multies Flowed Well

Do i Need To Stop Cause I'm Talking Crazy ??
Do I Need a Stray Jacket or a Walk In Baby ??
Railly the Vibes are like Isralies,Blowing Up Bloody Merry

Damm Nice Bars Right Here

Scary, I Should Just Relieve The Cherry N Put The Spark Out
Its 2:40 in The Morning its Pretty Fucking Dark Out
Nighttime Tripping On a Dark Route, Sorry if i Bark Out
I'm Far from a Dog..If u Wanna just Keep Moving i'm not Down to Live in a Parked House ..

Mayne Nice Finish Here Maybe A Bit Stretched At The End But Not Bad

Overall Nice Piece Here

[Riggz]

"I Needa Shine But Thought Of You Hollering Bleeds My Mind..
Are You Gunna Relieve My Time? Was That The Plan Or Do i Need a Sign?" - nice Amb---

all around nice syllables and i understood where you were going with it.