On My Mind

[Gizmo Duck]

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Flagrant Assasins Vaporize the Masses/
Bodies and Caskets Burn like Lava and Acid/
Masive Blasters of Plasma Reduce Souls to Ashes/
Gun Slingers and Slashers compete for the Earth's Destruction/
Corruption Confusses the Weak and the Helpless/
the Selfless fight for the Human Rights and Continued Production/
a Deduction of Freedom Leads to Dispair and Disaster/
a Conduction of war by the Maestro's and Masters/

[QwarterZ]

Confusses

confuses? confucious? con fusses....

you get the point purdy good for a boredom write
keep it up

[Riggz]

Ill word play again. you're consistent, but are you diverse? What other topic can you drop besides doom and gloom of Earth's Destruction?

[Gizmo Duck]

i don't know, i'll try and come up with a diff drop in a lil.i gotta diversify my bonds nigga!

[Gizmo Duck]

thx for the feed back