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My Patience is Wasted workin the Day Shift/
Minimum Wages make Paper Chasing Contageous/
Crack Payments are Dangerous but worth Police Containment/
Your Name Bold on the Pagelist of the Courtrooms Arraignments/
now your Blown up and Famous,Family says you need to Learn your Lesson/
your Minds Never Resting,now Your Counting your Blessings/
the Issue is Pressing,Lawyers and Prosectutors Verbally Wrestling/
you Feel like Betting, cuz to Them it's a Contest/
your Councils Defending and the D.A's on a Conquest/
your Head and Palms Sweat,you Look at the Jury and Realize they have All the Power/
12 Jurors look at you with Fury,and they're All Whiter than Powder/
Faces all Sour,No Way you can Beat Them/
you Never Reached them, they're after your Freedom/
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Post by Riggz »

Damn I recognize your style? Ruckus? Naw.. the flow isn't as concrete, but damn you got some nice word play Duck. "My Patience is Wasted workin the Day Shift/
Minimum Wages make Paper Chasing Contageous/
Crack Payments are Dangerous but worth Police Containment/
Your Name Bold on the Pagelist of the Courtrooms Arraignments/" -- i mean damn..
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thx for the feed man,unfortunatly alot of thats true :(
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Badass man.

"My Patience is Wasted workin the Day Shift/
Minimum Wages make Paper Chasing Contageous/
Crack Payments are Dangerous but worth Police Containment/
Your Name Bold on the Pagelist of the Courtrooms Arraignments/"

Sic as fuck! Great wordplay.
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thx alot
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