Def-init vs Yung Dosia

[Def-init]

5bars(10 lines)

3-0 KO rule, 4 votes to win

Rules. No feeding/Flippin.

due tomorrow after check in.
(Sorry bud I would have made it 48h, But I might be gone for a couple weeks tomorrow evening. Business reasons)

Check!

[YungDosia]

Ite...Ill drop tonight

Chek

[Def-init]

How's homo here gonna oppose me with mediocre diction?/ (Where ya going with this?)
By questioning more votes than Bush's re-election!/ (HAHA)

I enjoy exploiting bitch's more like Clinton did Lewinski./ (Played, dude!)
Especially this rapper still lacking spunk like a vasectomy./ (Nice recovery dude!)

I'm boldly clownin'...mercilessly, Illest's semi-newest rookie/ (That's Dosia, foo!)
and can smoke 'Dosia' for free payin' Pakistani rupees./ (uh, isn't that a buck or two?!)

I understand why you can’t stand like a man.../ (Sits peein', usin' Cool Edit 2?!)
You a fan! You a 'Stan'! You a bitch covered in edible testicle jam./ (EW...)

You blinked! Shoulda no-showed like 'Ambition', now buy drinks./ ("Run, Forest run!")
You none pro Lynx! Fuck 'Dosia'. In German, 'Dosia' means "That fart stinks".../

(That was the dankest rank Dosia, man.)

[YungDosia]

Fear these attacks...crush his body in half make it bend to the max!
Bitch ya lucky that your "Def"...Wish I was too, so i didn't have to Hear your raps!!
Puttin out queer ass tracks, u whack as fuck! dont give me any back talk!
So leave Battle Grounds...And save ya whack cypher verses for the motha fuckin Chat Box!!!
Needless to say u have no talent, heart, or a chance in the world!
I told him get ya hustle up! start "Grinding"...So he tried to dance with a girl!!
Ur a Joke a Comic!.... I smoke the bomb shit!
Run up in ya house... and leave ya Head Leaking In The Sink like a broken faucet!!!
U broke uve lost it...Ya niggas "Bump Ya Songs"? and thinks a Stars appearing??
Well It Makes Since....
Cuz Everyone Knows "Def Peoples" are hard of hearing!!!

10 keyed in 5 minutes

[Riggz]

I'm not going to break this down, but I will explain vote:
Def - honestly man.. you should've taken a little more time on this diction/re-election, and rookie/rupees? Your set ups weren't that good and neither was your delivery... then you had that terrible closer with "buy you drink.. and fart stinks.. wow.. that line stunk!

Dosia.. yes I can tell you keyed this because that first bar looks like it was written by a 5 year old. The grinding line was cool.. but delivery could've been better. The faucet line was nice, but the set up of "You smoking the bomb shit" was a filler.

Dosia takes this because his verse didn't churn my stomach (as much!)

wasn't much of a battle guys... sorry.

[Quix]

hmm

didn't like this battle as much...


the grinding and chat box lines stoood out the most for me!! it seemed that def was trying to hard to clown yung. Yung's verse was more direct at his opponent!!


vote: yung

[YungDosia]

Thanks for voting!!!

2-0 uppn