Don't trip of the content. I'm working on my cadence and flow. Let me know.
grab a seat welcome to rhyme central,
academic essential, gone need a notebook pencil,
PhD name n credential, influencial,
big monumental, is my cadence sequential?
Thanks homies.
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OK, HONESTLY I FELT IT SHOULD BE LONGER, THAT SOUNDED LIKE A GREAT STARTED OFF POINT, next time just make it longer.

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real talk. made me think but not too much cus it was pretty short. nice quick 1 2 tho
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Thanks. it's just an intro...been struggling with structure/cadence and flow...tryna work the kinks. Good looking tho.
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