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STOP IT!

Post by Riggz »

This here is a quick key, some shit that would probably sound better on the mic.. but eh, give me a day or two and you might just hear this shit... nevertheless... niggaz recognize:

I see a lot a shit on ILLEST, hot heads respect this
Punchlines down ya throat, might pop your necklace
You ain’t Biggie on the site, from a Pac perspective
Yall either drunk or impaired, Cause ya drops is reckless
Every rookie gotta earn it, you can not neglect this
Got Lawgix for the scoop, Only Scott is Help-less (http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/lawgi ... 15134.html)
Swear to god if you jump, kid you will get dealt wit
Hot flames that you spit, only get you melt-quick
It’s a shame that your writs, is all but self-less
Stop with your lame verses and your off the shelf-shit
And the rest of yall niggaz, just way too co-cky
Newbie’s hard for the beef, but soft as broccoli
Off the streets of N.Y. or L.A. swap-meets
Take it back where you found it, and do it promptly
Cause you ain’t got skillz, and ya flow is choppy
You at the free throw kid, Riggz quick to drop-threes
If my bars is too heavy, then you Catz can spot-me
If I need an ill beat, I know Mass has got me
Wanna rip one of Kurse’s, shit might get costly
Yall some frontin’ ass kids, betta back up off-these
Either switch your style up or swap ya proxy
Face it, you little newbies can’t do what they do
It's a fact you can't can't rap, nigga that's the Tre-"Truth"
This ain’t a X-box and this shit ain’t fake dude
Get “control” of your temper, or you will get played dude
Take the criticism bitch and just say thank you
Cause nobody gives a fuk about what you make dude
Step to me wrong, I’ll find where you stay dude
Have your coffin fit perfect like tailor made dude
I know it’s January but this ain’t your season
Mad cause you slept on? Probably a reason
If the water ain’t movin’ kid.. they ain’t feedin
Grab a tampon, nigga… stop ya bleedin’
Blows from the punchlines, man dodge and weave
If you verse ain’t being felt, then drop your steeze
Or may be just may be, there aint a lot to see
If you don’t like what goes on here.. stop and leave…

...and if you get offended by this verse, then it was about you! LMFAO!
Last edited by Riggz on Sat Jan 09, 2010 4:47 am, edited 1 time in total.
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and if you get offended by this verse, then it was about you! LMFAO!


????


This was supposed to offend someone??? lmfao...Who??


p.s i've seen better from you, but i like how you included a couple of Illest's Emcees in yah Rhyme!
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Quix wrote:and if you get offended by this verse, then it was about you! LMFAO!


????


This was supposed to offend someone??? lmfao...Who??


p.s i've seen better from you, but i like how you included a couple of Illest's Emcees in yah Rhyme!
you just like talkin' shit don't you? No real purpose behind your babblin' just straight up shit talkin'! :roll:
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Haha, props on the shoutout.
Good shit.
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Mass Effekt wrote:Haha, props on the shoutout.
Good shit.
Think you can get a good beat to this? Old skool style like on some D-nice 808 shit?
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Well, damn, I hope that XBOX line wasn't directed at me. I've been playin' my position.
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360 wrote:Well, damn, I hope that XBOX line wasn't directed at me. I've been playin' my position.
Naw my man.. LOL you cool 360, i see you buildin'... keep your head up.
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I see a lot a shit on ILLEST, hot heads respect this
Punchlines down ya throat, might pop your necklace


Lmao Waaay To Go In Yoo


You ain’t Biggie on the site, from a Pac perspective
Yall either drunk or impaired, Cause ya drops is reckless


Uhhh .. Get um Riggz


Every rookie gotta earn it, you can not neglect this
Got Lawgix for the scoop, Only Scott is Help-less

Lmao.


Swear to god if you jump, kid you will get dealt wit
Hot flames that you spit, only get you melt-quick
It’s a shame that your writs, is all but self-less
Stop with your lame verses and your off the shelf-shit


Weak.


And the rest of yall niggaz, just way too co-cky
Newbie’s hard for the beef, but soft as broccoli

Lol


Off the streets of N.Y. or L.A. swap-meets
Take it back where you found it, and do it promptly
Cause you ain’t got skillz, and ya flow is choppy
You at the free throw kid, Riggz quick to drop-threes

Geet um..


If my bars is too heavy, then you Catz can spot-me
If I need an ill beat, I know Mass has got me
Wanna rip one of Kurse’s, shit might get costly

aiight u Saying you Gunna Pay For the Beat lol


Yall some frontin’ ass kids, betta back up off-these
Either switch your style up or swap ya proxy

Cool . But NO.
lmao


Face it, you little newbies can’t do what they do
It's a fact you can't can't rap, nigga that's the Tre-"Truth"


Shot fired lol


This ain’t a X-box and this shit ain’t fake dude
Get “control” of your temper, or you will get played dude
Take the criticism bitch and just say thank you


Came hard with this...


Cause nobody gives a fuk about what you make dude
Step to me wrong, I’ll find where you stay dude
Have your coffin fit perfect like tailor made dude
I know it’s January but this ain’t your season
Mad cause you slept on? Probably a reason
If the water ain’t movin’ kid.. they ain’t feedin


Nah.. aint feeling it.



Grab a tampon, nigga… stop ya bleedin’


Come on how fucking Played out is that.

Blows from the punchlines, man dodge and weave
If you verse ain’t being felt, then drop your steeze
Or may be just may be, there aint a lot to see
If you don’t like what goes on here.. stop and leave…


LOL..



you had some funny lines in this shit i Liked it.


Stay Up n keep Dropping.
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Riggz wrote:
Mass Effekt wrote:Haha, props on the shoutout.
Good shit.
Think you can get a good beat to this? Old skool style like on some D-nice 808 shit?
I'll see what I can do.
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ThaOneYouHate wrote:And This Line Here..

"Mad cause you slept on? Probably a reason"

Kinda Dissin Yourself Man.. Cuz i Remember You Said You Were Tired Of Gettin Slept On When Ya Didn't Receive Feed in A Diffo Drop Lol...

Nice Drop Homie.. Stay Up Man...
You would bring that shit up wouldn't you...you Benedict Arnold.

And Yes.. I pretty much was just typing anything towards the end.. wasn't even going to post it.. was going to just use this as an audio... blah who really gives a flying fuk when the days through.
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that's why I like you Hate.. you have your own opinion fuk what the "haters" say... no pun intended. ;)
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nice drop mayne punches r krazy haha
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Nice man. Had me laughing in a few parts.
I have read better from ya. But this is still good.
Keep ya head up homie!
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Post by P.T.R-ins »

:D this wasnt bad at all but .....
where is hard-core in it? lol
but ill tell you my real opinion after i hear it on audio....thumbs up bro 8)
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Wus'up P-T-R.. how you been you damn Serb... yo, I was listening to some underground radio station and I heard ya boy's song on it.. haha, shit had me trippin.

anywayz, thanks for the love on this shitty ass key.. haha.
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