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im just sayin

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i dont try to be any one but me/
but if i happen to slightly resemble he/
it means nothing 2 me, except that we/
might have been thru a certain similar situation/
that had stake in the weight of our formation/
similar lanscapein on the lawn of our foundation/
but thats where it ends, cuz he in the fountain chasin/
nickels and dimes, im at the bank donatin/
lames makin it hard to enjoy hip-hop/
i climbed to the top/
they sitin in a catapult, waitin for the rope to be chopped/
like they gonna be magically thrust to a spot/
and think gettin there wit no work u gonna have said spot locked?/
yea u got a good chance...a good chance to get dropped/
u dwight howard from the arc, u got no shot/
im king james wit the buzzer beater/
a little deranged, for sum change ill drag ur cousin deeper/
into the dessert and let the buzzerd eater/
i love eatin corny rappers, 2 me theres nothin sweeter...



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Re: im just sayin

Post by QwarterZ »

This would prolly sound doper if you dropped it in a audio

that's how the flow seems to me....I always try to do my lyrics like that....
confuses people? either way a nice drop very introspective keep writing dawg
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