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a lil sumtn sumtn

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lookin at myself
like where the fuck did I go wrong.
livin everyday
as if my life will always go on.
im all about ''today''
so I aint trippin off tomorro.
fuck its what I say
while I be blowin on this j.
this lifes a trip
like here to kurse's state
salinas where my gorillas stay
when the lyrics spray
I shoot em straight
neverminding what these nothins say
I shit on em
then urinate.
all my tracks they sure to hate.
these fakes is square like wooden crates
but I stay high in outer space

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Post by Loon E Lou »

good look. i agree dawg. haha. jus tryna expand the options a lil bit. ill take that an roll wit it.
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Post by ~TITAN SPITEFUL~ »

it was hard to catch tha flow but i was feelin tha structure nigga

when the lyrics spray
I shoot em straight <--- i liked this bar tha best keep droppin homie
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good shit dawg appreciate the look
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Yea this was aight....not the best tho'
I haven't heard your audios but I think I will peep
n drop comparison....otherwise keep writing!
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Post by Loon E Lou »

yea dawg i think i bust better on audio. all the audio gotta start sumwer tho
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