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Somethin' To Say pt II

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Only where truth subside I could dig up lies
where we pick up ties, tug only to slip up twice
so goes the war but I ain't really the give up type
I pick up slack and pull closer the anamoly
the figurative metaphor, push back bodies pleeeease
you cannot come close, I lead the pack with red nose
kick it old school, 23 pair'd sittin' high, retro's
workin' hard, work it out, dip sets where your chest go
come on buddy let go, I push the world past atlas
meteor belts, and Orion without the cat lisp
suffering suckatash, he backflip'd, distracted
hello it's the mantis, preying on fly dudes and caterpillars
snatching crowns and spitting rhymes pack'd with filler
kickin' jellystones and snatch their basketcases
stay on a active basis, spin hard and act evasive
roll your car's on icy patches, it's a likely accent
may he say accident? dude don't get the sentence, past tense
I move like a pelican, I fly tight like a bird virgin
keep the word swervin' keepin' other's work's nerrrvous
hello I move verses, you could say he's fixin' the bible
checkin' his vitals, sight like the vision in rifles
good god, I don't know what to say no more....
you could watch your future fly by, facing escriment
the world is my stomping ground I am the bravest elephant
lacing intelligence with braggadocio and selfishness
you could drink my blood but you can't break bread with him....


I'm done.....just needed to get one good one off LoL!
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Re: Somethin' To Say pt II

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Not back dude.. You definately got word-play n vocabulary down.

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hot stuff most definitely

"stay on a active basis, spin hard and act evasive"
i diggs this
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Re: Somethin' To Say pt II

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Ha, how'd I miss this one... I love cartoon references... "suffering suckatash...", "kickin' jellystones and snatch their basketcases"... haha, i love the braggin lines you got in this and the word play is silly QZ. This is a memorable post my man.

haha... loved it.
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the world is my stomping ground I am the bravest elephant
lacing intelligence with braggadocio and selfishness

that shit was tight

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Re: Somethin' To Say pt II

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Riggz wrote:Ha, how'd I miss this one... I love cartoon references... "suffering suckatash...", "kickin' jellystones and snatch their basketcases"... haha, i love the braggin lines you got in this and the word play is silly QZ. This is a memorable post my man.

haha... loved it.
LOL! I thought I snuck one by with the jellystone ish
good thing you caught it tho' LoL!

oh and on a sidenote the beginning was a reference to a tug of war...hopefully y'all peeped that too LoL!
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Post by S.O.S »

"spitting rhymes pack'd with filler" lol aint that a diss 2 urself?

i was really feelin the opening and the ending, middle was good 2.

i know that sounds mad generic lmao but i aint just talkin out my ass


u cannot come close, I lead the pack with red nose
kick it old school, 23 pair'd sittin' high, retro's

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Re: Somethin' To Say pt II

Post by Quix »

meh i liked the last one a bit more (part 1) but this was defo better in the wordplay cat.


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