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Transformation n evolution changed into you
mirrored images I speak of the basic principles
stare into the eyes of myself more grown
where truth n lies soak up into sore bones
ridicule as a ordinary person victory as a artist
lines written for rehearsin' recitin' my hardest
development turns to nothin' in a older element
life's lesson taught me to keep movin' and treddin'
dead end's, twist's n turns I'm here in my absentness
I grow weary of the puzzles in Time's Labyrinth
at the tollgate of heaven the turnaround is hell
I can't count my blessin's so I'm lost in this eternal cell
where my eyes can't withold this sight of fear
my ear's don't wanna hear the shit I said for years
motionless to today's apocalyptic moves ghastly
I'm stuck on this earth as each soul just passes me
acknowledgment possibly will set this soul free
that's all you owe me instead of actin' like you know me
second's press on slowly and the hour's is sluggish
flows diamond encrusted but I still ball on a budget
who'd believe in any of my transgressions
you a goddamn pessimist pickin' on a man's depression
soakin' it up to prosper as yourself but not for me
you don't seek honesty just 15 dollars closer to poverty
cuz that hood shit allows a simpler openin'
while this shit's closin' in I'm stuck...frozen in...
Time where my mood resembles our present state
shut down from lessened wage to promote war let's engage
StraY could never take the fall I'm forever standin'
if Hip Hop is my passion then my flow is time...everlastin'
no pause to break but allow me a moment to think
if I was opposin' the ink would I be composin' the sink????

this was a old written of mine
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Transformation n evolution changed into you
mirrored images I speak of the basic principles

damn ...


second's press on slowly and the hour's is sluggish
flows diamond encrusted but I still ball on a budget
who'd believe in any of my transgressions
you a goddamn pessimist pickin' on a man's depression


that shit flowed ILLY!



nice piece here Q-Ball!
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second's press on slowly and the hour's is sluggish
flows diamond encrusted but I still ball on a budget
who'd believe in any of my transgressions
you a goddamn pessimist pickin' on a man's depression


shit was dope man.... deep i digged it, your structure was on it. good rhymes my main man.. keep elevating man you seem to be improving with every drop... peez

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I am going to bump this
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