Da Nemesis vs. Absolute

[Absolute]

Da Nemesis---->

5 bars?..kinda short but ok


take a look at my elevation as i perform lyrical meditation//
pressure escalatin at the moment of levetation//


deep thoughts salivatin on the mic, leavin the mic blazin//
nigga u yet 2 see u facin the rap version of jason//


i detach mind from soul on levels of biblical amputation//
im takin the #1 spot, u suffer career cancellation//


see i been in this a min and i was known as the ceaser//
i left 4 a min, they said i died, so im back reincarnated in the form of the reaper//


u gonna be a witness like them jehovas people by the way ill make u a believer//
u fuckin with raps reaper so allow me 2 introduce u to the crypts keeper//

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Absolute --->

Not where we usually battle but whatever..

Welcome to the site!! N Now that trash is OVER..I BLAST COLDER n treat his verse like Jewish faith and PASSOVER/
Throw SMASHED BOULDERS at your GLASS SHOULDERS, nigga how you gone drop ass then ask whos the CROWN HOLDER?!//1

The LIES OVER.. you FOLKLORE TEACHER! You no longer HOLD THE FLOOR, SPEAKER!/
He a mini me, just MORE WEAKER..roll with two bloods and FOUR HEATERS since you the CRYP KEEPER!//2

ALAS, AT LAST someones here to BLAST at you and your PEOPLE/
Ya verse is so SEE THROUGH! NEMESIS?? ... Nigga does this look like RESIDENT EVIL?//3 (lmao)

Naw.. just THE poor budget SEQUEL, without the INTERCHANGING, ZOMBIES WAITING plus its only slightly ENTERTAINING/
FEEL LIKE YOUR GAMING? Me too, specially since his verse clearly had no RETICLE FOR AIMING!//4 (where ya personals @ lol)

Just STATING, OVERALL YOU BLOWIN BALLS and your styles in need of a MAJOR OVERHAUL/
I SMOKE HERBS WEARIN OVERALLS! Should change names to "Tactical Nuke"..cuz you join a board n be like "Fuck it ill BLOW EM ALL!"//5


Not my best but enough! Uppin for votes

We've tallied 2-0 my way from people dropping votes in the callout section where the original thread of this battle is located. If those don't count then uppin for 3 votes. if not somebody vote so we can close this.

[Loon E Lou]

daaamn. both were.....eh. better than what i can slap down but yall want an opinion. well....nemesis' shit seemed a lil played. i think the only punch that stood out to me was absolutes resident evil line. other than that fellas.......im speechless. which is why im typing. haha. but yea i give it to ABSOLUTE. jus by like...one line tho. they both seemed crammed, forced or whatever u textcees wanna call it.


vote:absolute.


count it if yall want. jus thought yall could use a lil feed.



Loon E out......

[Absolute]

Thanks for the feeed...1-0 my way

[MesaR]

Yeah wasn't impressed with this at all, and from what i've seen absolute you can do a shit load better,

BUT WHEN SAYING THAT..

Flow - Ab, you're bars were too way to long, and nem's was just to simple, so no one get's my vote on this one..

Personals - There was not one personal.. i only seen absolute through his name in the verse, no vote

Punchlines - Absolute has some solid punchlines, if you can keep alot of the filler word's out it would work out alot better,

Multi's - Absolute, had some good multi's too without them the flow would of been worse,

Enjoyment - Absolute. hands down..

Vote - Absolute,

[Absolute]

2-0 me. And there were personals Sequence. I even pointed out his verse had no personals. But its no matter, thanks for the feed.

[YungDosia]

punches-absolute
personals-absolute
wordplay-absolute
nameplay-absolute
flow-nem
enjoyment-absolute
overall-ab

Vote- Absolute