lyrically inclined

[eMCee Havic]

my emotions are dead havent felt shit for years
alive i cant quit or feel the drip of tears
in twisted mirrors i see what it is i could of been
but thats the past and it is now an i should of then
would i blend in this world grey in black an white
or end up a distored image reflected after nights
i've captured spite in the empty cold palms i have
had a horrible childhood but should i blame mom an dad
the wrong of man has troubled my thoughts and ideals
lots of people are fakes i wonder if theyll try real?
if my zeal takes the back burner would i survive
cause these words are my life i cant swerve the tides
you heard it right Modern's mind is a jungle of vines
i try to keep up with the pace but i stumble at times
i trouble my mind with the worries of man's wrongs
but even if my feet are battered an bruised i'll stand strong

[Haz]

my emotions are dead havent felt shit for years
alive i cant quit or feel the drip of tears
in twisted mirrors i see what it is i could of been
but thats the past and it is now an i should of then


UHHH !!! I Liked This yo .. Real Nice Opener,ur getting Better.
Real Foot in foot out kind Of Picture Depicted just from the 2 Bars.




would i blend in this world grey in black an white
or end up a distored image reflected after nights
i've captured spite in the empty cold palms i have
had a horrible childhood but should i blame mom an dad

Word.. Kind Of Reminding Me of My Own Style to be Honest,
This is Cool i'm Feeling it...N should U Blame Them ???


the wrong of man has troubled my thoughts and ideals
lots of people are fakes i wonder if theyll try real?
if my zeal takes the back burner would i survive
cause these words are my life i cant swerve the tides

NO! .. This Was your Falling Point in My opinion, just not Something that Kept Me grabbed.



you heard it right Modern's mind is a jungle of vines
i try to keep up with the pace but i stumble at times
i trouble my mind with the worries of man's wrongs
but even if my feet are battered an bruised i'll stand strong

haha, Cool Closer.. Pretty Decent Homie.
This Had a Spice of Lyrical.. i Don't Think The Title Fit Though,
N This verse Of urs reminds Me Of a Junior Hazard Style Lol.

I Liked this For the Most Part though.

Stay Up N Keep Dropping