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Haz
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Your all out of place Hoping your Panic Will Sell
Soo Underground your Bound To a Hammic In Hell,
No I Don't Get Chu Cause Your Rancid In Smell
You Got No Fucking Bars Cooking Romance In a Cell
My Bitch, that's The Definition of You ..
The demolition is true i make Sure a Mission is Drew
This Ain ya Field u just Peep In the Hole while i'm Pissing This Through
Attempt To Grow Son N Quit Rapping How Yo Guns Flair
Ghost Town? Boast Clown! Reason Therapists Knock N No Ones There
Spike belts Whip ya Flesh As The Mic Melts n Drips ta Death
Studying Might Help, Find Some books, Literally Grip The Best
Though ur Not Touching Me, Ain't a Scheming Pirate Wen i Hit Ya Chest
You Jump To Keep in The Air, One Thing Is Your No King
Fuck If It's Written theres No Reason ya Here, Treat The Fight Like Theres No Ring,
A Street Beating Shouldn't Be Odd Why There ain't Even a Care
Sure Ya Man'll Put That Battery In Ya.. Say U Got Energy??
Don't Flatter Me Dinna..Assault Ta ya Face Catch a Case I'ma Battery Winna
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Re: Aware.

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Good stuff man... Very poetic, tight rhymes, good flow.. I like it
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Even though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death, I will fear no evil, for you are with me; your rod and your staff, they comfort me.
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Re: Aware.

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This was purdy dope diggin' the vibe
got that anger flowin' throughout the piece
there's a sutilty to it aswell
very dope structure as usual! keep writing!
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