Jack Da Rippa vs ThoUghT

[JDR]

6 Bars
House Rules
Due in 24 hours
Don't matter who go first.

[NoVeL]

Check.. eh-hem Yo..

Jack Tha Rippa gone be more like Jack Tha Crippled,
After I crack both knee-capps n Let T- Mac scratch his nipples
He's no match, Take the daylight savin's approach n fall back..
only time we goin toe 2 toe is.. wearin' addias sandals wit No straps!!
I say he whipped like yogurt cream n low fat,
he's just about equipped 2 hit the road jack n just b'tween you n me,
U think he spit "hot-lines"?..
not cuz of his hot rhymes.. its more likely cuz his phone's tapped
Spit a bar my syllables is well red/read like the color of cinnabar,
get it straight, Jack's homicidal 4 reasons of bein jailbait..
how wud U feel if U were "tailgated".. 4 every time you dropped a bar
I'll nominee em n award, 4 havin' sum feet n sum balls,
but he cudn't be street if it called..
I told the dumb-fuck meet me at tha corner.. n he started readin' the walls
I Love my Lil' people,
Especially you Jack comin' out the crack of dicks n peeholes..
you can take "shots" homie..
but only a few R skilled enough 2 basket freethrows,
I got witty bars n the nicest raps, my punches will knife ya throat n leave ya windpipe detached
.. Imma hand em n L.. cuz this a heist n his win I just Hi-Jacked

[JDR]

I said 6 but I'll just match you...

Yo....


I'll flip ya flows back, ya known whack so this bitch don't know Jack
Shit on ya whole rap, who's "Scared of ThoUghts"?, I got a "Script of Prozac"

The fist can own kats, I've showed that, he gon' pass and break when we meet
Have ya chased by my peeps, coz I don't "Fuck with ThouUghts", i'd rather "Masterbate in my sleep"

We can clash and debate in the street, get ate up and beat, and start to tell those are places from Rip
Bars swell Tho's faces and lips, is that a cloud in ya avy or a Marshmellow takin' a shit?????????

I'm puttin' loose led staples in ya two red nasals to choose deaths label
Coz if I knock on ya door, You'll be "runnin out the back of the cryb" like "boot leg cable"

Juss stupid kids wit no clues of this, I lay the nicest of true rap
And fuck ya verse, I don't bother "readin' ThoUghts", I "pay my Psycic to do that"

I hate to light this confused kat, Rip here so you can begin to hate the movement
I always hear about "ThoUghts on the street" but it's just "Interstate Improvements"

Everybody been watchin' for ya first W, and we will again when our pupils stop swellin'
That's why the only time you'd catch me in a Thoughts thread is to see what the Google bots sellin'.

Fuget it..

[MesaR]

Punches - Jack.
Personals - Jack
Flow - Jack.. slightly
Wordplay - Thought
Enjoyment - Jack..

V/jack.

Both verse's were pretty sick, jack came sick with it like always, and thought i dont understand how you have 10 losses for 0 wins.. you had a couple of funny lines, keep up the battles..

[Absolute]

I liked thoughtz verse.A lot of little wordplay with a little clowning and good flow. But he didn't utilize his whole verse. He kind of fell off at the end. Thoughtz, try to make every line attack your enemy. Your verse tends to be very descriptive and vivid, but with no emphasis on any particular punchline. Once you get into the habit of attacking in every line..you sir will be a force to be wreckened with. Because I agree with Seq, you're way better than your record shows. Favorite line was "jailbait"
Jack...I guess you did as expected..I think there was a bar or two i wasn't really feelin but for the most part you did your thing. Favorite line was the "psychic".
BUT Jack GMV due to better pucnhlines and personals, overall just a better battle verse. But thoughtz..you did your thing. Real talk.

Jack GMV

[Riggz]

I would've broken this down, however I couldn't follow Thought's flow; but I will say this; Thought you've improved some since reading your other battles. You're learning how to attack, but you're still tossing in personals that aren't really there. Add more structure to your bars so we can flow with you and stay in attack mode with every bar. Don't stray off course with T-mac lines and freethrows that aren't relevant to the battle.

As for Jack. Hot shit. Many quotables, almost every bar was memorable like the prozac, the masterbate and the boot let cable. Closer was top notch. Damn near a perfect battle rap in my opinion.

vote = Jack

[MesaR]

Someone close and update this..