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DaPrince
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If Aladdin was a lyricist

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Our meeting was fate, it was no coincedence
she relayed to me her life and every incident
so my intent was to prevent any harm at her expense
so i expended my energy to circumvent her lament
cement her heart's content; grant wishes like a genie
i showed her the world, no, a whole galaxy
she took away my breath, I was flying, no gravity
on a magic carpet yeah i was just glad to be
apart of her life so I said run away with me
I know a place where we can escape to our dreams
I showed her fireworks & she was intrigued
All night we could talk like we never fatigued
now every girl I see, reminds me of she
cuz in the mind of me, shes more divine than a queen
I don't drop rhymes all the time, but when I do, I prefer to spit fire
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Re: If Aladdin was a lyricist

Post by Young K »

This was kool real creative, but if you got a hold of the "a whole new world" sample remixed the beat and spit this on it dawwwwggg that would be awesome, hmmm good idea...

Ohh and my bad about the collab never got around to it...

But for real you should look into audio.
Last edited by Young K on Sun Feb 21, 2010 7:50 am, edited 2 times in total.
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