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Jack Da Rippa vs .@MB!T!0N

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8 Bars / 16 Lines
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Don't matter who go first..
24 hours..
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Bet. Whens The Deadline?
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Re: Jack Da Rippa vs .@MB!T!0N

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no reason for shit talkin' nigga...Imma bury you.

Yo....

So it's come to this, the gloves or fist? I know it's tough to pick
I'll dump this bitch, punches like the "SubStaNz shit", we all know he'll be "duckin quix"
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/substanz-vt15691.html

Juss for the fuck of it, I'll grab ya crew, and put ya goons on the spot
inhaulin fumes till ya drop, and put an "End to A.M." like it was "noon on a clock"

Im not tha dude u wanna box when I put out most by surprise
amb!t!on must not be "Seeing clearly", since "he took out both of his i's"

I'll leave you broke and denied, go and start somethin when we know ya far frontin'
No life, coz when I log in, "Ambition always in the chat" like the "scrollin' bar function"

Imma blow ya heart pumpin', he garbage and it's a shock that he writes
Only time we see "Ambition comin' after $Money$" is when he "Logs in the site"

this aint a prob. or a fight, and it aint that serious, he's lame
".@mbition." aint never been the type to "get to the point", so he puts the "periods in his name"

I'll have you fearin' this as pain, this guys fans be known for frontin’
Coz he couldn’t be “on top of this board” if we replaced ‘em with the “I-Candy Clothin’ button”

I’ll stand on ya toes and crush ‘em, I’m waitin to see the rage from his angry friends
But they’s no reason for us to be “Budden heads”, he’d just “Change his avy again”

I’m a problem sonny..

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I'll Stone Wall Jack Son He Ain't Con Ducting Right
Falseness Touching Hype Grants The 50 Bucking Stripes
Ya Lil Cookies Muffins Nice? Shes That Loose Slut, Overused Butt
Like W - B You Hit THe Rode Jack .. How You Fucking Tight ??
You Claim To Be a Problem N More, Like a Billy Dane And Lil Fame
Club Hit Ya Face'll Be Mopping The Floor,Came At me Droppin ya core
Like a Trip To Budlight, Buds Light The Brightest Shit i've Gotten Before
Diego's By Myside Get Popped In The Dor I'm Stopping Ya Tour
You Can't 'Ova The Counta With No Option In Store
Like Demertoligst notez everything u Jotting Is Poor..
I' Lead While Jack Kits For Training Day Like Ones Denzel Washington Wore
Ya Ego Stunt's Big On Ya Like Xtra Large,Like U New To Swipes Test ya Cards
Jacks Disses Couldn't Be Accu - Rate Based On a Integra Charge ..
Thigh On The ground ya Capt-Shin is Top'd Like skitso's with blowupdolls u Yappin fa Props
Pulling a Hommy On ya Self U Display No Method Man,Hood In Bac Ya,Handz up smoke Out cha Mouth
U Was Asking Fa Shots! Amb Put Um 2 Sleep If His Mate Aint a Shemale Why Else He Jack In The Box??

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Re: Jack Da Rippa vs .@MB!T!0N

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Flow - Jack
Punchlines - Jack
Multies - Amb
Word Play - Amb
Name Play - Jack
Personals - Jack

I was going to do the point system on this one but I'd rather just explain;
Jack - shit was tight for the most part, only line I didn't like was the Money line which I think Dosia used one time (not saying you bit it, but it wasn't original). Other than that, almost jaw dropping punchlines. Especially the way you played with his name.

Amb - You weren't direct as you should've been. You spent a lot of time rhyming words the same way you do in chat rather than attacking your opponent for example: "Jacks Disses Couldn't Be Accu - Rate Based On a Integra Charge ..
Thigh On The ground ya Capt-Shin is Top'd Like skitso's with blowupdolls u Yappin fa Props
Pulling a Hommy On ya Self U Display No Method Man,Hood In Bac Ya,Handz up smoke Out cha Mouth" - I mean really Amb, you hardly dissed him at all.. you just basically described his avatar. I think that entire set of bars was just wasted which counted against you in my opinion.

I'm going with Jack for the more direct punch approach.

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Thx 4 votin' and tha props Riggs. Much respect.

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I think Riggz nailed it on the head with his vote.. i would of voted exactly the same, Jack just had better personals, an all round better verse, Jack
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Uppin' this one.
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Imma have to say jack on this one, his was more personal and in text thats one of the big things..
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Re: Jack Da Rippa vs .@MB!T!0N

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VOTE on this mufucka. Shits been open almost a month.
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Re: Jack Da Rippa vs .@MB!T!0N

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Punches: Jack
Flow: Jack
Personals: Jack
Nameplay: Jack
Wordplay: Ambition
Multies: Ambition
Enjoyment: Jack
Creativity: Ambition

Vote: Jack


Ambition You Could Of Been Attacking Any One To Be Totally Honest.. Jack Da Rippa Was Consisent With The Personals/Nameplay, And Overall More Enjoyable. Ambition You Didn't Do To Bad Though, You Just Aren't Really Attacking Jack In This One. If i We're You I'd Work On Using The Cats Y'all Both Agree'd To, It Would Of Helped You Out A Whole Lot More. Maybe If This Was Just a Punches/Multies/Complexity Type Of Battle, You Would Of Been More On Point, But Props For Trying Though..You Both Had Good Verses, Good Battle Y'all.
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