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Riddle me That ..

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Who Spits With No Meaning Riddle Me That?
Ego'd Out Cop Get Hit With a Victory Slap, Wheres ya Victory At?
Bring My History Back .. Your History .. Brat..
Steve Biko Face What i'm Headed For Is Peace
Metiphoric Beast, U'll Blow After Life Yeah Medics For it Least
I'm With it Moore Like It's All Conspired you Should All Retire
Have ya Coff Drop to Hell We call it Halls of Fire .. Mauling Tires
Willing To Even Move, this Ain't Even Dude,
Like John Doe ain't recognized By Mom Yo ..
A Season Cruise is Shipping Spice Ta Me ..
Boston Tea Party The bitch n i can Give Life Ta Sea ..
They say ya punchlines ain't Direct enough
Mix Personals with Complexity n they don't Get the Stuff
I'm Stranded But they Ain't Hearing Me Def As Fuck ..
If it Ain't a Run Down .. i'm Up Loading Mics ..
When They Stuck H Ta the A Z-Share Like The Uploading Site
Living The Family Life, Mobbing On M-Cs Like The Family Type
I'ma Uprising The Anti Christ, Had To Bann Me Twice ..
Napoleon To Hitler I've Painted pictures Slowly in The Scriptures
Another Rapper Shot.. Keep Thinking U Holy In The Twister ..
Ya Spin is a Joke, I Get To The Point If i have to Swim In a Boat
Cannibal Tendencies Handle My Enemies
No Deception Their Reflection Hits Candles & Hennessey
Exotic Jab's Grazes What X Topics Grab'd,
So a Star Is Far From what The Next Rocket Stabs
Or Should I Say Flamed? How Could I Stay Chained
No Hanging Medallion just Banging With Stallions
Smooth Moves On Every Rocky Surface,Though Nervous
I Don't shoot ideals i reach um This is Wit No Cocky Purpose
Trench-coat Trench home, Dense Smoke like i went Chrome
Tense Votes, Tense Bones, Friends Choke At The Vent Stone
Atheist Or Believer, Passive Or Aggressive,
Take This In The Freezer,Cold Cus Everything i'm Asking is Neglected
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Re: Riddle me That ..

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$.@MB!T!0N.$ wrote:
Who Spits With No Meaning Riddle Me That?
Ego'd Out Cop Get Hit With a Victory Slap, Wheres ya Victory At?
Bring My History Back .. Your History .. Brat..

[Brat is awkward to throw in there, other then that nice]

Steve Biko Face What i'm Headed For Is Peace
Metiphoric Beast, U'll Blow After Life Yeah Medics For it Least

[Nope, bad wording]

I'm With it Moore Like It's All Conspired you Should All Retire
Have ya Coff Drop to Hell We call it Halls of Fire .. Mauling Tires

[The wordplay with the cough drop line was exception, but the mauling tires at the end wasn't necessary again. That is like a run on sentence without purpose]

Willing To Even Move, this Ain't Even Dude,
Like John Doe ain't recognized By Mom Yo ..

[No]

A Season Cruise is Shipping Spice Ta Me ..
Boston Tea Party The bitch n i can Give Life Ta Sea ..

[No]

They say ya punchlines ain't Direct enough
Mix Personals with Complexity n they don't Get the Stuff

[Nice]

I'm Stranded But they Ain't Hearing Me Def As Fuck ..
If it Ain't a Run Down .. i'm Up Loading Mics ..
When They Stuck H Ta the A Z-Share Like The Uploading Site

[Trying to fit too much into one bar]

Living The Family Life, Mobbing On M-Cs Like The Family Type
I'ma Uprising The Anti Christ, Had To Bann Me Twice ..
Napoleon To Hitler I've Painted pictures Slowly in The Scriptures
Another Rapper Shot.. Keep Thinking U Holy In The Twister ..
Ya Spin is a Joke, I Get To The Point If i have to Swim In a Boat
Cannibal Tendencies Handle My Enemies

[That rhyme is sick]

No Deception Their Reflection Hits Candles & Hennessey
Exotic Jab's Grazes What X Topics Grab'd,
So a Star Is Far From what The Next Rocket Stabs

[A rocket doesn't stabm as you say in the next bar.]

Or Should I Say Flamed? How Could I Stay Chained
No Hanging Medallion just Banging With Stallions
Smooth Moves On Every Rocky Surface,Though Nervous
I Don't shoot ideals i reach um This is Wit No Cocky Purpose
Trench-coat Trench home, Dense Smoke like i went Chrome
Tense Votes, Tense Bones, Friends Choke At The Vent Stone
Atheist Or Believer, Passive Or Aggressive,
Take This In The Freezer,Cold Cus Everything i'm Asking is Neglected
A few quotable lines that really stood out then some filler.
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Re: Riddle me That ..

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why thank you my Kind sir.


One thing .. Going like line , line , line , line
n it makes the Flow sound sick .. So i'm not Sure How my "run ons" Are a flaw. lol Not fighting it just Curious. Let me know
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Re: Riddle me That ..

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I didn't mean that you have run ons all the time.

The mauling tires part doesn't fit in the actual bar, and it could go without it. That is all I am saying, it doesn't further the line at all.
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