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i usually make my own beats, but my nigga hooked me up wit this one. [soundclick]8875217[/soundclick]
and im new, and will rturn the feed. lemme kno wut u thnk.
also i jus released my mixtape. u can download it here http://www.illestlyrics.com/copyright/aa8wwaszbr0h
or lisen to and download all the tracks from my soundclick... soundclick.com/d3m0
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littlefranky
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Last edited by littlefranky on Mon Mar 15, 2010 1:24 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Dude 1st off, Welcome to illest, My name Is Matt but Go By Deciple, Im the Christian Voice on illest cuz im the only christian rapper on here lol.
2nd the soundclick play didnt work there were an error but i went to your sound click and bro, you got skill. i am really diggin your flow, delivery and all that, lyrics are solid man, i am looking forward to hear more, i am downloading your whole album bro.. Good Stuff. Mad Props and Respect
~~Deciple~~
2nd the soundclick play didnt work there were an error but i went to your sound click and bro, you got skill. i am really diggin your flow, delivery and all that, lyrics are solid man, i am looking forward to hear more, i am downloading your whole album bro.. Good Stuff. Mad Props and Respect
~~Deciple~~
Philippians 4:13
I can do everything through him who gives me strength.
Psalms 23:4
Even though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death, I will fear no evil, for you are with me; your rod and your staff, they comfort me.
I can do everything through him who gives me strength.
Psalms 23:4
Even though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death, I will fear no evil, for you are with me; your rod and your staff, they comfort me.
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littlefranky
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Re: Demo - If I...
damn... didnt kno this link didnt work
thanks for lettin me kno tho. and thanks for the support
btw, im also christian but i guess not exactly a christian rapper. i dont usually cuss in my raps tho at least.
thanks agin
and i fixed the link
thanks for lettin me kno tho. and thanks for the support
btw, im also christian but i guess not exactly a christian rapper. i dont usually cuss in my raps tho at least.
thanks agin
and i fixed the link
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drunken jesus
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Re: Demo - If I...
good shit, presence and confidence is there verses were pretty dope each one seemed a lil better than the last flow was a lil monotone in the first verse but its just a minor flaw other than that its good throughout same with delivery although a lil deadpan at points it suits the style you're going for, hooks wrote well but it could be delivered/processed to be a bit catchier so its more memorable
overall: good song one of the best i've heard on here from a new user in awhile
overall: good song one of the best i've heard on here from a new user in awhile
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]
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Re: Demo - If I...
awwwwww damn dawg. this ma shit right here. i dunno why but errything flows perfect. actually i do know why. haha. ur dope dawg. i dunno if mainstream was the feel u were goin for but thas what it felt like for me. mos def id like to knok sum shit out wit ya homie. keep it rockin pimp.
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Im not your typical christian rapper, if its possitive and can reach any1 on a personal lvl and help some1, that to me is christian music.. we definitely need to do a couple tracks together...
Philippians 4:13
I can do everything through him who gives me strength.
Psalms 23:4
Even though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death, I will fear no evil, for you are with me; your rod and your staff, they comfort me.
I can do everything through him who gives me strength.
Psalms 23:4
Even though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death, I will fear no evil, for you are with me; your rod and your staff, they comfort me.
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FlipSide
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That was ok..... nice style
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Re: Demo - If I...
this beats fuckin dope!!! lyrics are ill as hell so is the fuckin hook man... u fell off a few times but u knew u were and u picked urself back up on beat... this is a siiiick track man... good shit man wanna hear more from ya fam!!! peace
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Re: Demo - If I...
I heard were u fell off didn't really bother me tho cuz I was bumpin' 2 dis dope drop man. 4 a new user u came in and did ur thing dats how it has 2 be done. I thought it was pretty sick man keep droppin' like 2 hear more 4rm u
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