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Lazy Blues

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jazzy jawn with plenty of swing and bounce, jazz piano chords and funky melodic saxophone & flute riffs

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You should attach the mp3 to the post if you can so I can listen and give ya feed.
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k got you, for some reason it wasn't letting me upload to the site cause i was using the white skin
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I like the idea behind this one, and feel it has some potential, but I feel like some of the sound samples sound too video game-esque, like old nintendo or something.
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listened to this again to try to hear what you meant, overall i went with brighter instruments in this so maybe thats it? or could be the non-chord piano its a CP80 which is an electro-acoustic hybrid piano which has a slightly different tone/character than an acoustic chords might be a cp80 too can't really tell by ear in a full mix cuz the difference is more subtle with lower chords
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Re: Lazy Blues

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What type of trak u think this can be? I like the chillness of it, but still pretty upbeat. I found the beats i was gon send u its jus my shit keeps turnin off on me. I dont kno wus goin on with it witch is y i jus been on here via phone. I like this though hay-zeus. Very melodious. Alotta life to the beat. Not all repetetive like most. U can tell u put the work into transitioning the beat. I tip my hat to u sir

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good looking out loon & really i got no clue what kinda track i'd write to this cuz like you said it's kinda a mix of mellow and upbeat
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
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