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Haz
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Blind chaos

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eyes red i'm sober it ain't drugs getting at my head
the term apply fled you preach with no reach how many fly dead?
you say if they dead how's there a Fly? It doesn't Appear to eye
but it Does if you've Checked the Numbers a Big threats the Summer
cause when its hot people shoot backwards like dyslexic gunners
What's a Young Adult to do? Locking in with the rests a Vault for you
No Role Models to Ha-ult Me Threw or is that just another Salty view
In the intentions of good i'm Going Platinum there Mentioned as wood..
resembling casket's holding Cold hearts no soul sparks just Dissembling tactics
i gotta hold it together please Leave me Be,
unsatisfied souls don't stamp me as food i'm no E.B.T,See me Flee..
The maze i'm Set in .. where they Play with weapons day To day be Headin's
Island vacations portrayed as heaven child molester made a reverend
fluid trades aids electing almost hitting 20 will i Stay the Seven?
my day's like any other numeric sign,they throw life so i Cherish mine
Cruising this world.. no Paris time, fuck it make gay marriage Fine
Get that Bum a Car like Forget your old carriage grind..
still Blind chaos structures in And drives us all mad drunk conductor spin
I'm no politician but just live your life
instead focusing what kid is tryfe or Who could knock Out Kimbo Slice..
why Law down a person's Will? thats mind Working Skills,
that are first instilled when people come out through birth the thrill, so give um a choice..
give um a voice there's a few rough patterns this Rhythm could moist,
most of the things they chain is cause their stupid n heartless,
who's to say all southern hip hop music is garbage,
Check it out do you listen to Kanye's Diamonds are Forever with ya Necklace out?
not To take a stab at cha, but they sharpie out the genocide in Africa
They say theres No substance i'm just Flowing this Threw,
i'm just going in and only thing going is you..
Many feel our President holds Socialist Views..
i'm Anti social Communicating with bars my Vocals'll Do..
i bullet chaos these are not Hot hollows,
Why can't a Man sag His pants With out a Cop's Follow?
All armless people will be Masters of Swords
Give every Lil jon most Lyrical rapper Award
I mean this blind chaos Plays a Roll.. like a eyeless man
taking hold of rock's that'll pop & blaze his Soul
but dude rather take his chances while he takes his Stroll
look at the rep most Rapist's mold, a popular favorites Cold
So the world's one big fucking Goliath where's the David toll?
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NoVeL
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Re: Blind chaos

Post by NoVeL »

Amb..

Feelin The Drop, But I Guess I Would Like 2 Hear Audio Cause I Have A Really Hard Time Following Your Flow. Also I Noticed The Beginning Has Nothing To Do With Your Drop.. Everything Could Prolly Have Been Re-worded

The Dopeness Began:

The maze i'm Set in .. where they Play with weapons day To day be Headin's
Island vacations portrayed as heaven child molester made a reverend
fluid trades aids electing almost hitting 20 will i Stay the Seven?
my day's like any other numeric sign,they throw life so i Cherish mine
Cruising this world.. no Paris time, fuck it make gay marriage Fine
Get that Bum a Car like Forget your old carriage grind..

!LL
Last edited by NoVeL on Sat Apr 03, 2010 7:46 pm, edited 3 times in total.
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Re: Blind chaos

Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

i agree io had a hard time followin the flow n scheme of ur rhymes but jus a bit passed halfway u went off.... maybe it was jus a build up or somethin but there were only lines here n there in the first half..

pretty much when u said this music is garbage is where u went off on this shit, i was diggin this drop from then on.

this was pretty dope man, tho its been awhile since ive read some of ur shit. and i would like to see some extensive multies from u ;)

keep droppin son
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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