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K KiLLaH
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That Real Nigga Shit

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All my bars sick like a medical cage..
But naw this aint a gift its poetical rage
These haters talking shit give me credit in ways
Dey Hated Jay-Z's hits now their mentioning K's
Now Im one step closer to attention n praise
Time to even out the balance da suspensions been raised
My interventions been weighed ima massive attraction
Im da truth in da booth while yall lacking da factions
Rappin stackin wit action... lights n cameras
Flow for sold out crowds n recite my stanzas
Who cares if the critics didnt like my gramma
Made a 100 grandson copped some ice for grandma
Do em dirty like Im rapping n I hyped atlanta
Cuz my blocks so hott we ignite the scannas
Got the cops on our cocks while were tryna cop
Tryna see a nigga locked living life in a box
So I had ta think twice but supplying the rocks
Its one life, one mic I rely on my drops
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Re: That Real Nigga Shit

Post by QwarterZ »

Word^^^^^^^^^^^

it's been awhile since I read K's work
but this does seem really dope
came across smooth for the most part
but some of the punches did seem played
but still a nice piece nonetheless
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Re: That Real Nigga Shit

Post by K KiLLaH »

yeah you guys are right i dont like it just an exercise
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Re: That Real Nigga Shit

Post by Riggz »

I see a quick key here, polishing the dust off. Flow and syllables were on point. Punchlines were average.
"Do em dirty like Im rapping n I hyped atlanta" - what you know about the ATL? ;)
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