Eluding my mind

[FlipSide]

Why should i elude you..my life spent tryna seclude you
From the present past n future like you never existed
But now that im lifted i see u made me gifted
Like those kids that are savant idiots its pure genius
And now im bleeding your precence out my essence
Like a soul thats leaving its vessel onto this paper
a Conversation sparker a tool of my meditation
Focus of creation ta leave opponents guessin
what is they worth when i rhyme every word hurts
cuz im hittin harder that tysons knockout punch
It was just a hunch but its clear you ducked
Im pushing ya beak over like donald the duck
And these niggas wanna blast at me.. say im blasphemy
assasinate me but my characters still ya trajedy
Im living averagely forgotten by my family
Only to be remembered when they hold they hands at me
Nevertheless i adress the common surroundings
people just not an object of my common consent
Rape ya whole area and allow you to ya path
My martial scrips attack ya hits in the gravel pit
leave ya face ghosted like with liquids swords
Out the mouth of a genious with an iller mans method
A verbal crane with me at the end of it to wreck shit
Swinging from a microphones jack with lirics i kick
Making me iller than those somalian kids
Im lettin ya get cha best n quick bitch
cuz like flies to shit i come well equipped
to drop lines ta make ya head twist like the exorcist
sensor this.. imma public spit my scripts in front ya kids
N see what fruits they give one they roots is digged
Falling far of the tree, ur blood even followin me
Like a false profet the antichrist got ta dance with me
With two left feet as levrage hell pick the beat
Till theres nothing to salvage but his own decree....
This is not what eluded me i concluded see
My destiny provided me with the key ta let my mind breathe...

[QwarterZ]

And these niggas wanna blast at me.. say im blasphemy
assasinate me but my characters still ya trajedy
Im living averagely forgotten by my family
Only to be remembered when they hold they hands at me

that flowed together nicely
I was feeling this piece, it does seem cliche...

BUT doesn't take away from the reality....got some nice word usage in there aswell
nicely done I'd say a 6.8/10

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seemed that you used to many in line rhymes but kept changin the main ones so the flow was kinda lost through out the piece