Where I'm At #1

[complexity]

In this game there is a lot of honor, props for the spots you conqueror/
that's why I clocked the lock ness monster with a rocket launcher/
it seems like the top MC's have gotten stronger, drops are longer/
collabs that were often pondered are opportunities lost and squandered/
while beef is on the rise; many fall in pits; its homicide/
artists have gone and died, or call it quits, only the strong survive/
I've demolished all the walls and bricks; the game will not divide/
fucking communists, I'm Toyota, they can't stop my drive/
I'm astonished by the limelight, in my prime I was closer/
my rhyming was doper, every line I took the time, I was eying them over/
the eyes of a soldier, either I inspire or spit fire like hova/
in 05 I blacked out, almost died of phenomia, should have been inside of a coma/
I've dropped titles, at the point of no return, you can't stop psychos/
crazy enough that I shot a lot of your pop idols with assault rifles/
I'm hostile with this hot style, I've fought and, its got wild/
it was all smiles, until your lost child was tossed in a nuclear stockpile/

[The Gonz]

Damn, this was sick! The rhyme schemes were creative and executed perfectly. The Toyota line is dope as hell lol. I absolutely loved the first 2 bars. Multies were ill as well. I needed to read something like this, its a nice kick in the ass to go out and write more and try. I think I've become complacent as a writer and needed a nice reminder that there's better out there lol. Nice drop, Plex. When I get my shit together, we need to collab again.

[complexity]

Damn, this was sick! The rhyme schemes were creative and executed perfectly. The Toyota line is dope as hell lol. I absolutely loved the first 2 bars. Multies were ill as well. I needed to read something like this, its a nice kick in the ass to go out and write more and try. I think I've become complacent as a writer and needed a nice reminder that there's better out there lol. Nice drop, Plex. When I get my shit together, we need to collab again.

Slight exaggeration. But thanks for the feedback.

[QwarterZ]

In this game there is a lot of honor, props for the spots you conqueror/
that's why I clocked the lock ness monster with a rocket launcher/
it seems like the top MC's have gotten stronger, drops are longer/
collabs that were often pondered are opportunities lost and squandered/

this whole thing was purdy dope, I'm diggin' the vibe
I especially like those lines I quoted! came along very nicely!
you did your thing on this plex! nice to see you droppin' again!

[Phasewon]

ill shit, too many quotable lines, the multies were on point
As usual and your executed them perfectly with weaving them
Into a seamless flow, can't hate on this piece, all
around dope shit.

[complexity]

On two or three of my recent pieces, I can see how you'd get that impression. I'll grant you that them last two bars are especially weak.

Did some editing that should fix the disappointment factor.

[- Mutual -]

yeah this was pretty good dope flow i gotta say and stong lines all the way through maybe a lil bit weaker i dunno maybe you got bored at that point but still not terrible lines this was overall a good drop too read cus shit i'm only feedin the people that leave feed so keep'em comin plex

[complexity]

yeah this was pretty good dope flow i gotta say and stong lines all the way through maybe a lil bit weaker i dunno maybe you got bored at that point but still not terrible lines this was overall a good drop too read cus shit i'm only feedin the people that leave feed so keep'em comin plex

Appreciate the feed, that may also be because I changed the lines before some of these guys read it.

[MOEstradamus]

this whole drop was pure fire good shit its hard to quote these lines but one that is stuck in my head after readin this drop is

I've demolished all the walls and bricks; the game will not divide/
fucking communists, I'm Toyota, they can't stop my drive/

idk it stuck good shit bro loved this whole piece

[Riggz]

Honestly, I felt this piece fell off towards the end. Usually you're more on one particular topic and you ride it till the end, here you've strayed the last few bars. I liked how in the beginning you talked about your history here. I like seeing that from you, talkin about what you've witnessed on the boards the ups and downs, then you kind of went off from how you used to inspire or spit fire to how you had phenomia to you killing off pop idols most it seems for the sake of word play (I may have missed the metaphorical aspect of it.. I don't know). Seemed as if you lost your train of thought for a second and recovered.

I would say this flowed as well as usual. You have a particular kind of flow that can be picked out easily in a crowded room. You kept the multies coherent enough to follow with ease.

But again, the only flaw in my opinion would be that I would've liked to see you stay on the subject you reflected on in the beginning and then finished it off on what you predict will happen in the future.

Enjoyed none the less.

[Haz]

In this game there is a lot of honor, props for the spots you conqueror/
that's why I clocked the lock ness monster with a rocket launcher/
it seems like the top MC's have gotten stronger, drops are longer/
collabs that were often pondered are opportunities lost and squandered/

Nice .. Flows On Point, Everything's stitched together fresh

while beef is on the rise; many fall in pits; its homicide/
artists have gone and died, or call it quits, only the strong survive/

good bar

I've demolished all the walls and bricks; the game will not divide/
fucking communists, I'm Toyota, they can't stop my drive/

Straight.


I'm astonished by the limelight, in my prime I was closer/
my rhyming was doper, every line I took the time, I was eying them over/
the eyes of a soldier, either I inspire or spit fire like hova/

Went in..

in 05 I blacked out, almost died of phenomia, should have been inside of a coma/
I've dropped titles, at the point of no return, you can't stop psychos/


crazy enough that I shot a lot of your pop idols with assault rifles/
I'm hostile with this hot style, I've fought and, its got wild/
it was all smiles, until your lost child was tossed in a nuclear stockpile/


Doesn't seem to have That heat, Its probably cus u Have to Extend it more.


But overall this was a Cool drop, seen you drop Sicker verses in your Volume scripts.