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Re: 80's Baby

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i'd Stand in Tha Drive Way Thinkin i Was Michael Jordan On Tv
There Was Only One Problem i Was Young Enough To Believe Me

loved that bar... 80's baby here also.. god that brings up some memories man i used to hate visiting my aunts. thanks alot im going to need some counseling.
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Re: 80's Baby

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did you mispell WIPE again? lol.....either way
this was dope I am also a part of the 80's baby group

Used To See Family At Family Reunions But i Dont Remember Their Names
Now i Look Through Photo Albums Talk About Trips Down Memory Lane
Catch Myself Lookin At Pictures Just To See Auntie Pinchin My Cheeks
A Smile On My Face So Fuckin Big i'd End Up Squintin For Weeks
^^^^^^^^^^that was dope

honestly it reminds me of some Joell Ortiz type ish
very smooth and very real at the same time! keep writing!
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Re: 80's Baby

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As I said on Aim, sometimes its the "Quick Keys" that people can relate to the most. I felt a lot of these lines despite the fact that you didn't apparently put much time into them.
$yphili$ wrote:Title Pretty Much Explains Tha Whole Drop... Was Born in Tha Mid 80's So i Grew Up in Tha Late 80's Early 90's.. Some Bars Point That Out.. Nothin Really Amazin Wasn't Tryin To impress Anyone... Just Another Key Cuz i Came Up With Tha idea For Tha Topic So i Ran With it... All Feed is Appreciated..

i'm An Eighties Baby So i Might Be A Product Of Tha Heroine Craze
i Remember When Kids Used To Come On My Porch i'd Scare 'Em Away

I would have reversed them lines, but nice.

That Was My Spot Where Ma Dukes Always Put My Hair in Them Braids
Used To Fall Off My Bike And Get A Band Aid Just To Tear it Away

That's right. Ha.

Used To Walk Around Struttin i'd Always Think i Was A Tough Guy
No Time For Tears i'd Just Whipe 'Em Away Cuz i Had Seen Enough Cry

Not the strongest rhyme, the rest was solid.

Thinkin i Was Tha Shit Cuz i Was Always Rockin Them Guess T-Shirts
There's No Doubt Moms Dealt With Her Stress While She Worked

Alright.

Used To See Family At Family Reunions But i Dont Remember Their Names
Now i Look Through Photo Albums Talk About Trips Down Memory Lane

I liked the rhyme better than the content. Though I can relate to that first line.

Catch Myself Lookin At Pictures Just To See Auntie Pinchin My Cheeks
A Smile On My Face So Fuckin Big i'd End Up Squintin For Weeks

How cute!

i Remember it All Like Yesterday Damn Them Were Tha Days Man
Thinkin i Was A Rebel Cuz i Was Paintin Side Walks With Spray Cans

Actually, that would make you a rebel. Good line.

i'd Stand in Tha Drive Way Thinkin i Was Michael Jordan On Tv
There Was Only One Problem i Was Young Enough To Believe Me

I never thought I was even close to his airness. But them bars are my favorite in this drop.

i Was Tha Only One Playin Of Course i Was Tha Champ Of Tha Court
Run in Doors Screamin "Did Ya See That!?" in A Rant For Support

I like that, and can relate.

Them Were Tha Good Old Days i'd Pay A Million Bucks Just To Go Back
But Now i'm Stuck Here Thinkin While i Sit in A Musty Throw Back
Nice ending bar.

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Solid. 8.5/10, the fact that its a key, makes it even better.
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Re: 80's Baby

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Used To Walk Around Struttin i'd Always Think i Was A Tough Guy
No Time For Tears i'd Just Whipe 'Em Away Cuz i Had Seen Enough Cry
There was something in it that i did not need punchlines to see
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Re: 80's Baby

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"i'd Stand in Tha Drive Way Thinkin i Was Michael Jordan On Tv
There Was Only One Problem i Was Young Enough To Believe Me" -- Back in the days when I was young, I'm not a kid anymore, but somedays, I sorta wish I was a kid again... back in the days...

Lol.. I liked it Toyh. Now a true 80's baby would've remembered "Purple Rain" and how in love with Apollonia I (cough) I mean "catz" was.. lol --oops I'm telling my age. You were probably 5 or 6 when that came out.

Yung Buck! LOL.
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