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K KiLLaH
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Flexorcism

Post by K KiLLaH »

Im just tryna kick a lil hip hop for em
So I keep posting hits in these hip hop forums
...I show love when I get props for em
Like everytime they gas me up i start flooring
Pedal to the metal battling world warring
Masarati lyrical body my meta-foreign
Serving niggas up like like tennis ta set a score n
Telling niggas that they suck on sites they net whore-N
Beat em so bad youd wanna forget for em
Cut his cards short n shuffle his deck for em
Guess my rap name wasnt much of threat for em
Now his food goes thru tubes thats shoved down his neck for em :twisted:
I ressurect boredom... by targeting foes
Plus name rings bells as far as marketing goes
I hope everybody knows when you start getting doe..
Its still tricking if you got it never bargian with hoes :!:
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Re: Flexorcism

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It was alright...I like the other one better
I see you was tryna be shocking....it worked
but not ALL THE TIME either way this piece is aight
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Re: Flexorcism

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Decent. Some looked a bit rushed. I liked the ending more than the rest of the piece. Still decent multies but nothing that really jumped out at me. Good drop brotha..
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Re: Flexorcism

Post by complexity »

This isn't even close to the level that you cypher at.

"I ressurect boredom... by targeting foes
Plus name rings bells as far as marketing goes"

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