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Re: Somethin I wrote a while back

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It was purdy dope...had some decent lines in there
how long ago did you write this bruh?
you goin' to make it a track? I think it'd sound decent on a track

otherwise some lines just stuck out purdy good
and some kinda dragged....but nice work nonetheless
keep writing broski!
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Re: Somethin I wrote a while back

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yup yup i liked this. shit was ku dawg. my kinda flow. for me, errything flowed pretty well. have alotta good lines that jumped out. shit was pretty long so i felt i had to leave feed after readin the whole thing. good read
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good stucture... and topic about being in class brought me back to grammar school
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