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I know my quality is still shit... But fuck it i got to express my self... Please peep tho
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Got a Lloyd Banks mixed with a Havoc vibe from it, nice job.
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It Helps When You Rehearse Ya Rhymes So It Dont Sound Like Your Reading A Book or Nothing. Also Your Spit Is Too Fast 4 This Beat, Homie You Gotta Stay On Point With The Claps & Syllables. Again I Hear Big Pun & Joe Crack But Slow It Down Cuz It Sounds Like Your Reading.

What I Do I Usually Put My Finished Tracks On My iPod So I Can Play Back The Value N See How It Would Sound 2 The Listener. Remember People Dont Know Your Flow So You Gotta Paint Them That Picture You Digg? Overall I Dugg It But I'd Say This Wasn't Your BEST 7/10
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Yea i forced this one... thats the truth... not my best... now i feel like i got to redo it... Thanks for the honest critic.. it helps a lot
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beats nice..yeah mike is slushin out

flo was in and out..some sweet spots but you fall out the pocket now and then..i like ya rythm and deliv style though..keep werkin that..

i agree with creative about soundin like you readin..
just try to put a lil swag on it so it's not as monotone...you got mad potential keep pushing dawg..1
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