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Stay on beat lose my flow

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No word play no nothing just a waste of time for me..... i wrote it,i tried to remember it but some i had to free cuz i lost a couple lines in the mix while spittin..and it was quick between me n a few guys.. like spit it record it and see who sounds better ...so this was mine
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Re: Stay on beat lose my flow

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this sounds like a good written bad audio ya need more emotion and emphasis behind ya bars ya dig?
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i dig....i diggit...i just gotta get a new mic...cuz if i get loud or someshit then there it goes...but its a point made and a point taken..thanks ma dude
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Re: Stay on beat lose my flow

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I like it.. the mic was off, but it sounded koo like some tech n9ne shit when he fades his mic on purpose and it sounds dope like a mix between between tech, yay, and mase

But yea get some equipment, you could do a lot better with a new one cause you got a tight flow
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