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[K KiLLaH]

I get gravy pay me, 80s baby far from fake an
Rhymes bad 90s swag so Im harlem shaking
Was quick to invest my money when i started caking
To clever to do a bid cuz the narcs is hatin
Product of my enviroment stars Im chasing
See me dreaming till I reach em or my heart is vacant
Rapping is what Im doing but the art is basic
To the critics, give a rating and ya heart is rated
Low scoring niggas feel scarred degraded
Get discouraged n think twice till their heart is faded
Not me i love a challenge from the start i stated
As far as this rap shit ill go hard n make it
Never slipping or exposed like my gaurd is naked
If you niggas got a shot n Im ya target take it
I rhyme with intelligence ya bars is hatred
See my minds to quick for ya lethargic statements

[DaPrince]

I get gravy pay me, 80s baby far from fake an
Rhymes bad 90s swag so Im harlem shaking
Was quick to invest my money when i started caking
To clever to do a bid cuz the narcs is hatin
Product of my enviroment stars Im chasing
See me dreaming till I reach em or my heart is vacant
Rapping is what Im doing but the art is basic
To the critics, give a rating and ya heart is rated
Low scoring niggas feel scarred degraded
Get discouraged n think twice till their heart is faded
Not me i love a challenge from the start i stated
As far as this rap shit ill go hard n make it
Never slipping or exposed like my gaurd is naked
If you niggas got a shot n Im ya target take it
I rhyme with intelligence ya bars is hatred
See my minds to quick for ya lethargic statements

Having the entire piece multi-syllable rhyming was impressive. The last two bars were my favorite though. You should definitely keep droppin.

[FlipSide]

Descent drop...flows good... simply good for audio as i read it.... i can almost make a beat around it.. guess thats good.. i could learn something off this