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Natural Disaster

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A different kind of love

Should they supply supplements, cleanse us n send
love to make sense of it, plus its expense in twist
they rush on in, as they start to rub lifelike fins
never knew a love like this, never knew lifeless then
I'm fly, but I got a feeling my stature is a penguin
fractured my appendage, covered in the matter of the engine
I sense a rapture in your questions, captured by attendance
flattered by lesson's, you say all that matter's is impressions
you caught me, I cry of a home covered in darkness
but you, your a lover, a artist, in your clutter'd apartment
your under departure, as I seem to stumble, utter some pardon's
this mess, it was embelished, the world that was once selfless
has found one person to help with, my troubles, impressive
I am no longer helpless, I'm engulf'd (y'all get the conception?)


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nice
... but you, your a lover, a artist, in your clutter'd apartment
your under departure, as I seem to stumble, utter some pardon's....
favorite lines... real
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this had a real issue to it good shit. I like most of your shit due to the fact it has a good story behind it flow was nice no lines really stuck out bein great but still a nice verse good shit
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I like this topic....= )
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